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| − | :* | + | :* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed. |
| + | *The sources cited are appropriate to the page as a whole, but the inline citations do not refer to the correct sources. For example, source #7 should be cited where source #1 is in the body of the article. | ||
| + | *Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son. | ||
| + | *This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page. [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Priya Jhingan
- ... that Priya Jhingan is the first woman to join the Indian Army as an officer? Source: [1][2]
- Reviewed: Pizza in China
- Comment: Celebrating Women from India, July 2017
Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 19:26, 19 July 2017 (UTC).
- The sources cited are appropriate to the page as a whole, but the inline citations do not refer to the correct sources. For example, source #7 should be cited where source #1 is in the body of the article.
- Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
- This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page. MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)