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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed.
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*The sources cited are appropriate to the page as a whole, but the inline citations do not refer to the correct sources. For example, source #7 should be cited where source #1 is in the body of the article.
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*Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
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*This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page.  [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 20:50, 1 August 2017

Priya Jhingan

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 19:26, 19 July 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed.
  • The sources cited are appropriate to the page as a whole, but the inline citations do not refer to the correct sources. For example, source #7 should be cited where source #1 is in the body of the article.
  • Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
  • This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page. MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)