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*Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
 
*Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
 
*This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page.  [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
 
*This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page.  [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
 
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::{{re|MidwestCuttlefish}} have tried to address the issues brought up. Please do have a look. Thank you [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 11:23, 6 August 2017 (UTC) 
 
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Revision as of 11:23, 6 August 2017

Priya Jhingan

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 19:26, 19 July 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed.
  • The sources cited are appropriate to the page as a whole, but the inline citations do not refer to the correct sources. For example, source #7 should be cited where source #1 is in the body of the article.
  • Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
  • This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page. MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re have tried to address the issues brought up. Please do have a look. Thank you  FITINDIA  11:23, 6 August 2017 (UTC)