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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:16, 18 August 2017 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Priya Jhingan====
 
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* ... that '''[[Priya Jhingan]]''' is the first woman to join the [[Indian Army]] as an officer?  <small>Source: [http://archive.indianexpress.com/news/army-s-first-woman-officer-comes-to-its-defence/6959/1][https://books.google.co.in/books?id=C6wsDwAAQBAJ&pg=PA24&dq=Priya+Jhingan&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj5pdzz0JDVAhUHJ5QKHaTvB6gQ6AEIMDAC#v=onepage&q=Priya%20Jhingan&f=false]</small>
 
* ... that '''[[Priya Jhingan]]''' is the first woman to join the [[Indian Army]] as an officer?  <small>Source: [http://archive.indianexpress.com/news/army-s-first-woman-officer-comes-to-its-defence/6959/1][https://books.google.co.in/books?id=C6wsDwAAQBAJ&pg=PA24&dq=Priya+Jhingan&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwj5pdzz0JDVAhUHJ5QKHaTvB6gQ6AEIMDAC#v=onepage&q=Priya%20Jhingan&f=false]</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Pizza in China|Pizza in China]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Pizza in China|Pizza in China]]
 
:* ''Comment'': [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Women_in_Red/Meetup/50 Celebrating Women from India, July 2017]
 
:* ''Comment'': [https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:WikiProject_Women_in_Red/Meetup/50 Celebrating Women from India, July 2017]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:26, 19 July 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 19:26, 19 July 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed.  
 
:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed.  
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*This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page.  [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
 
*This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page.  [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
 
::{{re|MidwestCuttlefish}} have tried to address the issues brought up. Please do have a look. Thank you [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 11:23, 6 August 2017 (UTC)   
 
::{{re|MidwestCuttlefish}} have tried to address the issues brought up. Please do have a look. Thank you [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 11:23, 6 August 2017 (UTC)   
*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you for fixing the inline citations! [[User:MidwestCuttlefish|MidwestCuttlefish]] ([[User talk:MidwestCuttlefish|talk]]) 19:22, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 05:16, 18 August 2017

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:16, 18 August 2017 (UTC)

Priya Jhingan

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 19:26, 19 July 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The article is new enough and long enough, but has some punctuation and source issues that need to be addressed.
  • The sources cited are appropriate to the page as a whole, but the inline citations do not refer to the correct sources. For example, source #7 should be cited where source #1 is in the body of the article.
  • Some information is not reflected in the sources. None say she is an English teacher, where she lives, or that she has a son.
  • This is not a criterion for DYK, but there are missing periods and commas, as well as a comma where there should be a period (at "... Sikkim Express in Gangtok, In 2013..."). It could use some copy-editing before being featured on the front page. MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 20:49, 1 August 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re have tried to address the issues brought up. Please do have a look. Thank you  FITINDIA  11:23, 6 August 2017 (UTC)