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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough (though not by much) -- can it be expanded? There appears to be a lot more material in some of the references. Date created is ok. Hook fact checks out in reliable source; hook is short enough & sufficiently attention grabbing. The article is neutral & appears stable. No close paraphrasing detected. QPQ completed. I found a few problems with the text; "common" in the pseudo-lead does not appear to be cited anywhere (seems covered in ref 3). "The elongate body and partly transparent and pale yellow or olive with a silver operculum and belly." seems to have been garbled. More wikilinks (eg to geographical features) would be helpful. [[User:Espresso Addict|Espresso Addict]] <small>([[User talk:Espresso Addict|talk]])</small> 06:08, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough (though not by much) -- can it be expanded? There appears to be a lot more material in some of the references. Date created is ok. Hook fact checks out in reliable source; hook is short enough & sufficiently attention grabbing. The article is neutral & appears stable. No close paraphrasing detected. QPQ completed. I found a few problems with the text; "common" in the pseudo-lead does not appear to be cited anywhere (seems covered in ref 3). "The elongate body and partly transparent and pale yellow or olive with a silver operculum and belly." seems to have been garbled. More wikilinks (eg to geographical features) would be helpful. [[User:Espresso Addict|Espresso Addict]] <small>([[User talk:Espresso Addict|talk]])</small> 06:08, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | ||
::*Ungarbled now. geo links added. expaded to 384 words now....[[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 06:34, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | ::*Ungarbled now. geo links added. expaded to 384 words now....[[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 06:34, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | :::*Thanks, this looks good. The only outstanding issue is the citation for it being common. [[User:Espresso Addict|Espresso Addict]] <small>([[User talk:Espresso Addict|talk]])</small> 17:42, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | |
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Pseudomugil signifer
- ... that the Australian Pacific blue-eye was described from a specimen taken to Vienna?
Created by Casliber (talk). Self nominated at 12:32, 9 March 2015 (UTC).
Long enough (though not by much) -- can it be expanded? There appears to be a lot more material in some of the references. Date created is ok. Hook fact checks out in reliable source; hook is short enough & sufficiently attention grabbing. The article is neutral & appears stable. No close paraphrasing detected. QPQ completed. I found a few problems with the text; "common" in the pseudo-lead does not appear to be cited anywhere (seems covered in ref 3). "The elongate body and partly transparent and pale yellow or olive with a silver operculum and belly." seems to have been garbled. More wikilinks (eg to geographical features) would be helpful. Espresso Addict (talk) 06:08, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
- Ungarbled now. geo links added. expaded to 384 words now....Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 06:34, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks, this looks good. The only outstanding issue is the citation for it being common. Espresso Addict (talk) 17:42, 10 March 2015 (UTC)