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::*Done. - [[User:PM800|PM800]] ([[User talk:PM800|talk]]) 23:03, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
 
::*Done. - [[User:PM800|PM800]] ([[User talk:PM800|talk]]) 23:03, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Needs another review. - [[User:PM800|PM800]] ([[User talk:PM800|talk]]) 12:27, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Needs another review. - [[User:PM800|PM800]] ([[User talk:PM800|talk]]) 12:27, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
 
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:::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough. The page only had 2 sources, though, so I added coverage from a variety of media sources to show [[WP:N|notability]]. (I would appreciate being listed as co-creator of this article for DYK.) I don't see any close paraphrasing in the article. The hook ref is verified. However, I'm just wondering if this hook would be more attention-getting:
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:::*'''ALT1''': ... that in 2012, [[UCF Knights football|UCF]] wide receiver '''[[Quincy McDuffie]]''' set a school and [[Conference USA]] record by returning two kickoffs for touchdowns in the same game? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:58, 4 March 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Quincy McDuffie

Created/expanded by PM800 (talk). Self nom at 03:59, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

  • 16px I know it's really hard to rephrase things but I have some close paraphrasing concerns with sentences like "In his first collegiate game, he had a 95-yard kickoff return for a touchdown." (source says "In his first-collegiate game, returned a kickoff 95 yards for a touchdown".) Could you tweak some of this? Keilana|Parlez ici 22:23, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. - PM800 (talk) 23:03, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
  • 16px Needs another review. - PM800 (talk) 12:27, 22 February 2013 (UTC)
  • 16px New enough, long enough. The page only had 2 sources, though, so I added coverage from a variety of media sources to show notability. (I would appreciate being listed as co-creator of this article for DYK.) I don't see any close paraphrasing in the article. The hook ref is verified. However, I'm just wondering if this hook would be more attention-getting:
  • ALT1: ... that in 2012, UCF wide receiver Quincy McDuffie set a school and Conference USA record by returning two kickoffs for touchdowns in the same game? Yoninah (talk) 22:58, 4 March 2013 (UTC)