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* ... that the '''[[Rahway River Parkway]]''', designed by [[Olmstead Brothers]], was the first project of the newly formed [[Union County, New Jersey|Union County]] parks commission?
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* ... <s>that the '''[[Rahway River Parkway]]''', designed by [[Olmstead Brothers]], was the first project of the newly formed [[Union County, New Jersey|Union County]] parks commission?</s>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Rahway River Parkway]]''', designed by [[Olmstead Brothers]] in the 1920s, was a project of the newly-formed [[Union County, New Jersey|Union County]] parks commission?
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Rahway River Parkway]]''', designed by [[Olmstead Brothers]] in the 1920s, was a project of the newly-formed [[Union County, New Jersey|Union County]] parks commission?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/St. Lubentius, Dietkirchen]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/St. Lubentius, Dietkirchen]]
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Djflem}} The article is new enough, long enough and properly sourced, with no issues of neutrality. Earwig rates [http://www.rahwayriverparkway.org/the-inception-of-a-parkway.html this source] as a potential close paraphrasing. The hook is within length and potentially interesting. While the [[Olmstead Brothers]] portion of the hook is sourced in the article, the statement in the hook "first project of the newly formed [[Union County, New Jersey|Union County]] parks commission" does not have a source in the article. I might have found [https://npgallery.nps.gov/GetAsset?assetID=c68d8161-6de1-4088-9e61-e919ff1d9646 this source] from the NPS in a superficial search, but please confirm. A source in the article for the second clause of the hook and a QPQ are what stands before approval of this well-done article. [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]) 17:36, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Djflem}} The article is new enough, long enough and properly sourced, with no issues of neutrality. Earwig rates [http://www.rahwayriverparkway.org/the-inception-of-a-parkway.html this source] as a potential close paraphrasing. The hook is within length and potentially interesting. While the [[Olmstead Brothers]] portion of the hook is sourced in the article, the statement in the hook "first project of the newly formed [[Union County, New Jersey|Union County]] parks commission" does not have a source in the article. I might have found [https://npgallery.nps.gov/GetAsset?assetID=c68d8161-6de1-4088-9e61-e919ff1d9646 this source] from the NPS in a superficial search, but please confirm. A source in the article for the second clause of the hook and a QPQ are what stands before approval of this well-done article. [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]) 17:36, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
 
::: {{ping|Alansohn}} QPQ done. Don't know where I saw "first", so have cut that part of the hook. Did some slight rewording on the one source to address paraphrasing. Bare urls fixed. [[User:Djflem|Djflem]] ([[User talk:Djflem|talk]]) 17:19, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
 
::: {{ping|Alansohn}} QPQ done. Don't know where I saw "first", so have cut that part of the hook. Did some slight rewording on the one source to address paraphrasing. Bare urls fixed. [[User:Djflem|Djflem]] ([[User talk:Djflem|talk]]) 17:19, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
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:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] With the QPQ done and ALT1 added, the hook is ready to go. I struck out ALT0, as the "first" is unsourced. If the claim of first project can be sourced, I'd switch my preference to ALT0. [[User:Alansohn|Alansohn]] ([[User talk:Alansohn|talk]]) 16:58, 29 January 2018 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 16:58, 29 January 2018

Rahway River Parkway

Created by Djflem (talk). Self-nominated at 08:50, 16 January 2018 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping The article is new enough, long enough and properly sourced, with no issues of neutrality. Earwig rates this source as a potential close paraphrasing. The hook is within length and potentially interesting. While the Olmstead Brothers portion of the hook is sourced in the article, the statement in the hook "first project of the newly formed Union County parks commission" does not have a source in the article. I might have found this source from the NPS in a superficial search, but please confirm. A source in the article for the second clause of the hook and a QPQ are what stands before approval of this well-done article. Alansohn (talk) 17:36, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
Template:Ping QPQ done. Don't know where I saw "first", so have cut that part of the hook. Did some slight rewording on the one source to address paraphrasing. Bare urls fixed. Djflem (talk) 17:19, 23 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg With the QPQ done and ALT1 added, the hook is ready to go. I struck out ALT0, as the "first" is unsourced. If the claim of first project can be sourced, I'd switch my preference to ALT0. Alansohn (talk) 16:58, 29 January 2018 (UTC)