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::::::*'''ALT2a''': ... that '''[[Rano M. Shaiza]]''' helped further the [[Naga people|Naga]] peace accord by brokering a meeting between [[Angami Zapu Phizo|her uncle]], the founder of the Naga separatist movement, and the [[Morarji Desai|Prime Minister of India]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:03, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
 
::::::*'''ALT2a''': ... that '''[[Rano M. Shaiza]]''' helped further the [[Naga people|Naga]] peace accord by brokering a meeting between [[Angami Zapu Phizo|her uncle]], the founder of the Naga separatist movement, and the [[Morarji Desai|Prime Minister of India]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:03, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
 
:::::::* '''Comment''' {{u|Yoninah}} I think '''ALT2a''' is much better. Pinging {{u|Cwmhiraeth}}. Thank you [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 05:40, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
 
:::::::* '''Comment''' {{u|Yoninah}} I think '''ALT2a''' is much better. Pinging {{u|Cwmhiraeth}}. Thank you [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">'''&nbsp;FITINDIA&nbsp;'''</font>]] 05:40, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Approving ALT2a. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:00, 10 August 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Rano M. Shaiza

* ... that Rano M. Shaiza was the first woman Member of Parliament, Lok Sabha from the state of Nagaland? Source: [1][2] *ALT1 that Rano M. Shaiza was the first woman Member of India's Lower House from the state of Nagaland?Source: [3][4]

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 08:02, 12 July 2017 (UTC).

  • I took the liberty of removing "India" from the hook, because it seems rather prolix: the Lok Sabha is an Indian institution, and there is no Nagaland elsewhere. If you feel India should be mentioned, I suggest something along the lines of "was the first woman Member of India's Lower House". Dahn (talk) 07:52, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Yes Thank you, I'am fine with India being removed from the hook.  FITINDIA  08:00, 14 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping Have taken your advice and changed the hook, Please have a look at ALT 1.  FITINDIA  12:06, 29 July 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg This article is new enough and long enough. ALT1 seems satisfactory and the hook facts are cited inline. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:34, 6 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg The QPQ is not a complete review. Yoninah (talk) 21:44, 7 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Comment: Have completed the QPQ review.  FITINDIA  05:23, 8 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Restoring tick per Cwmhiraeth's review. Yoninah (talk) 10:41, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Now that I came by to promote this, I notice that the hook is very similar to dozens of other women's hooks that have been nominated, touting the subject as the "first". Like men, women who are notable do far more than just being "the first". I think you have a more interesting hook fact in Shaiza's efforts to advance the Naga nationalist movement. The fact that she was able to set up a meeting between her uncle and the prime minister to push ahead the Naga peace accord is a far more interesting hook fact, IMO. Yoninah (talk) 21:52, 9 August 2017 (UTC)