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| − | * ... that artist '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]''' ''(pictured)'' has [[dyslexia]], which causes difficulties in reading and math but may enhance visual processing? | + | * <s>... that artist '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]''' ''(pictured)'' has [[dyslexia]], which causes difficulties in reading and math but may enhance visual processing?</s> |
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| − | :* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]'''{{`s}} sculpture ''Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden'' is inspired by the [[periodic table]] and by [[Buddhism|Buddhist]] [[mandala]]s? | + | :* '''ALT1''': <s>... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]'''{{`s}} sculpture ''Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden'' is inspired by the [[periodic table]] and by [[Buddhism|Buddhist]] [[mandala]]s?</s> |
| − | :* '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]'''{{`s}} sculpture ''Butterflies of the Soul'' is inspired by a [[Santiago Ramon y Cajal|Nobel prize winner]]'s drawings of [[Purkinje cells]]? | + | :* '''ALT2''': <s>... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]'''{{`s}} sculpture ''Butterflies of the Soul'' is inspired by a [[Santiago Ramon y Cajal|Nobel prize winner]]'s drawings of [[Purkinje cells]]?</s> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Barbara Newman|Barbara Newman]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Barbara Newman|Barbara Newman]] | ||
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Substantial article on an interesting woman, with details on her work, on good sources. I like ALT2 by far the best, however not so much that ''(pictured)'' is missing and would need to be sqeezed in between author and work, and the passive voice. Perhaps mention "sculpture"? - In the article, avoid her name in two consecutive sentences? - Good free image, hopefully used. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 14:19, 6 March 2015 (UTC) | : [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Substantial article on an interesting woman, with details on her work, on good sources. I like ALT2 by far the best, however not so much that ''(pictured)'' is missing and would need to be sqeezed in between author and work, and the passive voice. Perhaps mention "sculpture"? - In the article, avoid her name in two consecutive sentences? - Good free image, hopefully used. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 14:19, 6 March 2015 (UTC) | ||
::Try these alternative phrasings, if they aren't too long. [[User:Mary Mark Ockerbloom|Mary Mark Ockerbloom]] ([[User talk:Mary Mark Ockerbloom|talk]]) 18:11, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | ::Try these alternative phrasings, if they aren't too long. [[User:Mary Mark Ockerbloom|Mary Mark Ockerbloom]] ([[User talk:Mary Mark Ockerbloom|talk]]) 18:11, 10 March 2015 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::* '''ALT3''':... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]''' ''(pictured)'' was inspired by the [[periodic table]] and by [[Buddhism|Buddhist]] [[mandala]]s to create the sculpture ''Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden''? | + | ::* '''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]''' ''(pictured)'' was inspired by the [[periodic table]] and by [[Buddhism|Buddhist]] [[mandala]]s to create the sculpture ''Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden''? |
| − | ::* '''ALT4''':... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]''' ''(pictured)'' was inspired to create the sculpture ''Butterflies of the Soul'' by a [[Santiago Ramon y Cajal|Nobel prize winner]]'s drawings of [[Purkinje cells]]? | + | ::* '''ALT4''': ... that '''[[Rebecca Kamen]]''' ''(pictured)'' was inspired to create the sculpture ''Butterflies of the Soul'' by a [[Santiago Ramon y Cajal|Nobel prize winner]]'s drawings of [[Purkinje cells]]? |
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| + | :::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] the last two, - I like butterflies of the soul best ;) --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 09:56, 11 March 2015 (UTC) | ||
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Rebecca Kamen
... that artist Rebecca Kamen (pictured) has dyslexia, which causes difficulties in reading and math but may enhance visual processing?
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... that Rebecca KamenTemplate:`s sculpture Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden is inspired by the periodic table and by Buddhist mandalas? - ALT2:
... that Rebecca KamenTemplate:`s sculpture Butterflies of the Soul is inspired by a Nobel prize winner's drawings of Purkinje cells?
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- Reviewed: Barbara Newman
- Comment: From ArtAndFeminism 2015 edit-a-thon; Suitable for Women's history month
Created by Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk). Self nominated at 00:22, 4 March 2015 (UTC).
Substantial article on an interesting woman, with details on her work, on good sources. I like ALT2 by far the best, however not so much that (pictured) is missing and would need to be sqeezed in between author and work, and the passive voice. Perhaps mention "sculpture"? - In the article, avoid her name in two consecutive sentences? - Good free image, hopefully used. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:19, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
- Try these alternative phrasings, if they aren't too long. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 18:11, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
- ALT3: ... that Rebecca Kamen (pictured) was inspired by the periodic table and by Buddhist mandalas to create the sculpture Divining Nature: An Elemental Garden?
- ALT4: ... that Rebecca Kamen (pictured) was inspired to create the sculpture Butterflies of the Soul by a Nobel prize winner's drawings of Purkinje cells?
- Try these alternative phrasings, if they aren't too long. Mary Mark Ockerbloom (talk) 18:11, 10 March 2015 (UTC)
the last two, - I like butterflies of the soul best ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 09:56, 11 March 2015 (UTC)
