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:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Full review needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 05:36, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Full review needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 05:36, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
*I just don't think the proposed hook is very sexy. Mightn't {{tq|"''that the last Polish '''[[red złoty]]''' were the so-called "insurgent ducats" minted at the [[Warsaw mint]] in 1831, on the eve of the [[November Uprising]]?''"}} be better calculated to catch the reader's interest, with flammable words like "insurgent" and "uprising"? [[User:Bishonen|Bishonen]] | [[User talk:Bishonen|talk]] 23:49, 2 April 2013 (UTC).
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*I just don't think the proposed hook is very sexy. Mightn't {{tq|"''... that the last Polish '''[[red złoty]]''' were the so-called "insurgent ducats" minted at the [[Warsaw mint]] in 1831, on the eve of the [[November Uprising]]?''"}} be better calculated to catch the reader's interest, with flammable words like "insurgent" and "uprising"? [[User:Bishonen|Bishonen]] | [[User talk:Bishonen|talk]] 23:49, 2 April 2013 (UTC).
 
***I like it :) --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 04:03, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 
***I like it :) --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 04:03, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
 
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*'''ALT1''' that the last Polish '''[[red złoty]]''' ''(pictured)'' were the so-called "insurgent ducats" minted at the [[Warsaw mint]] in 1831, on the eve of the [[November Uprising]]?
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*'''ALT1''' ... that the last Polish '''[[red złoty]]''' ''(pictured)'' were the so-called "insurgent ducats" minted at the [[Warsaw mint]] in 1831, on the eve of the [[November Uprising]]?
 
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Red złoty

A Polish ducat, or red złoty, minted in 1621 during the reign of Sigismund III Vasa

A Polish ducat, or red złoty, minted in 1621 during the reign of Sigismund III Vasa

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 07:11, 14 March 2013 (UTC).

  • I'm making some copy edits and left you a question in the edit summaries. I think you should removed the dates from the book templates and leave only the year, and reference 5's title needs tweaking--I think the name of the publication is part of the title. Drmies (talk) 18:50, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
  • OK, but now the burden is the "1320s" in the hook: I don't see that the article says that those coins (before 1526, I suppose) were called red zloty. If I read this correctly it seems that they were introduced as part of a monetary reform begun in the 1320s--is that correct? If so, the article should identify our coin more clearly in its early stages. Drmies (talk) 14:36, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
The source does call these coins red zloty: Dukat Łokietka, przedstawiony tu w rysunku, jest zatem pierwszym "czerwonym złotym" polskim. - "The Ducat of Lokietek (Wladyslaw), shown in the illustration, is then the first Polish "red zloty"". I guess it's in quotation marks though. I do think a more involved hook would be good.Volunteer Marek 18:18, 17 March 2013 (UTC)


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A Polish ducat, or red złoty, minted in 1831

Green check.svg QPQ done:Penn Symons
Green check.svg Article created by Piotrus on March 14, 2013 and has 2305 characters of readable prose
Green check.svg NPOV
Green check.svg 1831 coin image is in the PD
Green check.svg ALT1 Hook is interesting and taken AGF from the offline Refs 2: Zygmunt Gloger, Encyklopedia staropolska
Green check.svg Every paragraph sourced, looks like reliable sources
Green check.svg Earwig @ Toolserver Copyvio Detector found no copyvio
Pictogram voting keep.svg GTG -- Esemono (talk) 04:27, 3 April 2013 (UTC)
  • Note: no need to have two versions of the same hook, ALT1 and ALT2, one with "(pictured)" and one without: the promoter will remove "pictured" if it isn't. I've deleted the otherwise identical ALT2, and struck the original hook, which was not approved by reviewer. BlueMoonset (talk) 22:56, 3 April 2013 (UTC)