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*The push of the article has little to do with the FDR quote, which is only a piece of trivia in that context. I might recommend tweaking so that the reader understands a little about what makes this statue special or distinctive, instead of just another random park statue. City, or example, or mention the sculptor is notable or the year it was revealed, to provide at least a little context besides FDR's opinion of Lee. [[Special:Contributions/47.185.218.146|47.185.218.146]] ([[User talk:47.185.218.146|talk]]) 01:53, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
 
*The push of the article has little to do with the FDR quote, which is only a piece of trivia in that context. I might recommend tweaking so that the reader understands a little about what makes this statue special or distinctive, instead of just another random park statue. City, or example, or mention the sculptor is notable or the year it was revealed, to provide at least a little context besides FDR's opinion of Lee. [[Special:Contributions/47.185.218.146|47.185.218.146]] ([[User talk:47.185.218.146|talk]]) 01:53, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
 
:{{ping|47.185.218.146}} How's the revision above?[[User:MagicatthemovieS|MagicatthemovieS]] ([[User talk:MagicatthemovieS|talk]]) 16:24, 16 June 2019 (UTC)MagicatthemovieS
 
:{{ping|47.185.218.146}} How's the revision above?[[User:MagicatthemovieS|MagicatthemovieS]] ([[User talk:MagicatthemovieS|talk]]) 16:24, 16 June 2019 (UTC)MagicatthemovieS
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**Very much improved! [[Special:Contributions/47.185.218.146|47.185.218.146]] ([[User talk:47.185.218.146|talk]]) 23:04, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
 
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Robert E. Lee on Traveller

5x expanded by MagicatthemovieS (talk). Self-nominated at 17:33, 15 June 2019 (UTC).

  • The push of the article has little to do with the FDR quote, which is only a piece of trivia in that context. I might recommend tweaking so that the reader understands a little about what makes this statue special or distinctive, instead of just another random park statue. City, or example, or mention the sculptor is notable or the year it was revealed, to provide at least a little context besides FDR's opinion of Lee. 47.185.218.146 (talk) 01:53, 16 June 2019 (UTC)
Template:Ping How's the revision above?MagicatthemovieS (talk) 16:24, 16 June 2019 (UTC)MagicatthemovieS