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::: '''ALT1:''' ... that after playing with [[LEGO]] as a child, '''[[Roma Agrawal]]''' designed both the tip and bottom of the Shard ''(pictured)''? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 14:06, 18 October 2017 (UTC) | ::: '''ALT1:''' ... that after playing with [[LEGO]] as a child, '''[[Roma Agrawal]]''' designed both the tip and bottom of the Shard ''(pictured)''? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 14:06, 18 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::* The wording of ALT1 seems fine but I'd prefer that we only link to the subject. LEGO is quite famous already and so doesn't need a link. [[user:Andrew Davidson|Andrew D.]] ([[user talk:Andrew Davidson|talk]]) 21:15, 18 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Roma Agrawal
- ... that Roma Agrawal played with LEGO and then designed both the tip and bottom of the Shard (pictured)?
- Reviewed: Deborah Hutton
Created by Jesswade88 (talk) and Zeromonk (talk). Nominated by Andrew Davidson (talk) at 18:13, 6 October 2017 (UTC).
Timing OK, long enough, no copyvio or plagiarism. Unfortunately the information from the hook doesn't seem to be contained in the article-- or at least, the hook seems to suggest she played with Lego to design the Shard; but the article suggests she played with Lego as a child and then some decades later designed the Shard. Can you rework to make that clearer? Otherwise it's a great little tidbit, and the rest of the article is good to go! Owlsmcgee (talk) 22:14, 6 October 2017 (UTC)
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- ALT1: ... that after playing with LEGO as a child, Roma Agrawal designed both the tip and bottom of the Shard (pictured)? --Usernameunique (talk) 14:06, 18 October 2017 (UTC)