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* ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|Krzysztof Pastor's adaption]]''' of [[Romeo and Juliet (Prokofiev)|Prokofiev's ballet]] score of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States 30 years after it debuted [[Romeo and Juliet (Cranko)|Cranko's adaptation]]?
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*<s> ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|Krzysztof Pastor's adaption]]''' of [[Romeo and Juliet (Prokofiev)|Prokofiev's ballet]] score of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States 30 years after it debuted [[Romeo and Juliet (Cranko)|Cranko's adaptation]]?</s>
 
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. I came across your note on the DYK talk page about running this on April 26 in commemoration of Shakespeare's baptism. The hook seems very busy and the part about Shakespeare and Romeo and Juliet is a bit lost in it. What do you think about writing a different hook about the unique setting of the ballet in the 3 Italian political eras? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 12:48, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. I came across your note on the DYK talk page about running this on April 26 in commemoration of Shakespeare's baptism. The hook seems very busy and the part about Shakespeare and Romeo and Juliet is a bit lost in it. What do you think about writing a different hook about the unique setting of the ballet in the 3 Italian political eras? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 12:48, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*Well, I think it is big news in certain high class circles that after 30 years the [[Joffrey Ballet]] had changed which choreography it performs to Prokofiev score. However, if that upsets the "rhythm" of DYK, I'll have to make a change. I'll see what I can do. I also think there may be a policy against using plots for hooks. However, keep in mind that it is actually somewhat unusual for plots to be sourced. I only do so in some cases when I am producing a plot for a work I have never seen myself and want other wikipedians to be able to correct my text.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:25, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*Well, I think it is big news in certain high class circles that after 30 years the [[Joffrey Ballet]] had changed which choreography it performs to Prokofiev score. However, if that upsets the "rhythm" of DYK, I'll have to make a change. I'll see what I can do. I also think there may be a policy against using plots for hooks. However, keep in mind that it is actually somewhat unusual for plots to be sourced. I only do so in some cases when I am producing a plot for a work I have never seen myself and want other wikipedians to be able to correct my text.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:25, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
*('''ALT1''') ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|a new choreography]]''' of [[Romeo and Juliet (Prokofiev)|Prokofiev's]] score of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States 30 years after it debuted [[Romeo and Juliet (Cranko)|Cranko's adaptation]]?--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
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*('''ALT1''') ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|a new choreography]]''' of [[Romeo and Juliet (Prokofiev)|Prokofiev's]] score of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States, 30 years after it debuted [[Romeo and Juliet (Cranko)|Cranko's adaptation]]?--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 
**Note that I have eliminated both words that repeated in the hook, which probably makes it less busy.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 
**Note that I have eliminated both words that repeated in the hook, which probably makes it less busy.--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
*('''ALT2''') ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|a new choreography]]''' of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States that has three [[Act (drama)|act]]s set in three different decades?--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
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*('''ALT2''')<s> ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|a new choreography]]''' of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States that has three [[Act (drama)|act]]s set in three different decades?</s>--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:33, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
*('''ALT3''') ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|a new choreography]]''' of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States 30 years after it debuted [[Romeo and Juliet (Cranko)|Cranko's choreography]]?--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:34, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
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*('''ALT3''')<s> ... that the [[Joffrey Ballet]] is debuting '''[[Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)|a new choreography]]''' of [[William Shakespeare]]'s ''[[Romeo and Juliet]]'' in the United States 30 years after it debuted [[Romeo and Juliet (Cranko)|Cranko's choreography]]?</s>--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 13:34, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] OK, no problem. ALT1 reads best. Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
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:*Moving to April 26 holding area. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
 
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Romeo and Juliet (Pastor)

Created by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 18:36, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. I came across your note on the DYK talk page about running this on April 26 in commemoration of Shakespeare's baptism. The hook seems very busy and the part about Shakespeare and Romeo and Juliet is a bit lost in it. What do you think about writing a different hook about the unique setting of the ballet in the 3 Italian political eras? Yoninah (talk) 12:48, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Well, I think it is big news in certain high class circles that after 30 years the Joffrey Ballet had changed which choreography it performs to Prokofiev score. However, if that upsets the "rhythm" of DYK, I'll have to make a change. I'll see what I can do. I also think there may be a policy against using plots for hooks. However, keep in mind that it is actually somewhat unusual for plots to be sourced. I only do so in some cases when I am producing a plot for a work I have never seen myself and want other wikipedians to be able to correct my text.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:25, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg OK, no problem. ALT1 reads best. Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 17:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)
  • Moving to April 26 holding area. Yoninah (talk) 17:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)