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::*{{u|Cwmhiraeth}} Thank for the review. I agree to your '''ALT1''' hook suggestion.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 07:33, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Cwmhiraeth}} Thank for the review. I agree to your '''ALT1''' hook suggestion.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 07:33, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Reviewer needed for ALT1. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 09:54, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Reviewer needed for ALT1. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 09:54, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
 
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[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT1 at 162 char is below maximum and verified with citation at the end of the sentence. It's interesting ... guess the crown was heavy? Minor copyedit to make text more neutral, fully cited in-line and no apparent copyvios. Did not review items verified by previous reviewer, though note that the Borneo Bulletin Brunei Yearbook snippet view confirms the exhibit was established for the silver jubilee, (25-year anniversary of the coronation), which is now cited in the text. [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]) 06:59, 20 December 2015 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 06:59, 20 December 2015

Royal Regalia Building Museum

A decorated chariot used for the procesion
A decorated chariot used for the procesion

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 13:26, 28 November 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg This article is new enough and long enough. I have copyedited the article to remove some non-neutral wording. I do not believe the hook is correct, or at least the sentence in the lead which supports it is unreferenced. According to the Rough Guide source, the museum concerns the sultan's life rather than the commemorations of the 25 years of his rule. You could instead use ALT1
  • Template:U Thank for the review. I agree to your ALT1 hook suggestion.Nvvchar. 07:33, 15 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Reviewer needed for ALT1. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:54, 15 December 2015 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1 at 162 char is below maximum and verified with citation at the end of the sentence. It's interesting ... guess the crown was heavy? Minor copyedit to make text more neutral, fully cited in-line and no apparent copyvios. Did not review items verified by previous reviewer, though note that the Borneo Bulletin Brunei Yearbook snippet view confirms the exhibit was established for the silver jubilee, (25-year anniversary of the coronation), which is now cited in the text. SusunW (talk) 06:59, 20 December 2015 (UTC)