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:*{{Ping|User:GRuban}} Adjusted the wording, added the sources you provided and changed the hook. -- [[User:Thats Just Great|Thats Just Great]] ([[User talk:Thats Just Great|talk]]) 02:59, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
 
:*{{Ping|User:GRuban}} Adjusted the wording, added the sources you provided and changed the hook. -- [[User:Thats Just Great|Thats Just Great]] ([[User talk:Thats Just Great|talk]]) 02:59, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
 
*'''ALT3''' ... that after its beloved Canadian leader, '''[[Royce Coleman Dyer|Capt Dyer]],''' died his unit of the Slavo-British Allied Legion took to carrying a massive portrait of him and would later murder all of the unit's other officers?  
 
*'''ALT3''' ... that after its beloved Canadian leader, '''[[Royce Coleman Dyer|Capt Dyer]],''' died his unit of the Slavo-British Allied Legion took to carrying a massive portrait of him and would later murder all of the unit's other officers?  
 
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** [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I think we want a period after "Capt" (or just spell out "Captain", it's not that long), and a comma after "died", but if you disagree I am not going to block over it. Looks good to me! --[[User:GRuban|GRuban]] ([[User talk:GRuban|talk]]) 17:20, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
** [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I think we want a comma after "died", but that might just be my speech pattern, if you disagree, we can live without it. In general, looks good to me! --[[User:GRuban|GRuban]] ([[User talk:GRuban|talk]]) 17:20, 14 August 2019 (UTC)
 
 
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Royce Coleman Dyer

Created by Thats Just Great (talk). Self-nominated at 17:55, 8 July 2019 (UTC).

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  • Template:Ping Added some more sources, changed the intro and added a new hook -- Thats Just Great (talk) 18:53, 13 August 2019 (UTC)
  • ALT3 ... that after its beloved Canadian leader, Capt Dyer, died his unit of the Slavo-British Allied Legion took to carrying a massive portrait of him and would later murder all of the unit's other officers?
    • Symbol confirmed.svg I think we want a period after "Capt" (or just spell out "Captain", it's not that long), and a comma after "died", but if you disagree I am not going to block over it. Looks good to me! --GRuban (talk) 17:20, 14 August 2019 (UTC)