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:* New enough and long enough. No QPQ necessary (zero credits). I can't check the foreign-language sources, so I'm going to have to assume good faith. One thing I notice is the article needs copy editing for English. Have you considered taking this to [[WP:GOCE]], {{u|Jeromi Mikhael}}? The issues I found are enough to probably merit a copy edit before approval. [[User:Raymie|Raymie]] ([[User talk:Raymie|t]] • [[Special:Contributions/Raymie|c]]) 23:17, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
 
:* New enough and long enough. No QPQ necessary (zero credits). I can't check the foreign-language sources, so I'm going to have to assume good faith. One thing I notice is the article needs copy editing for English. Have you considered taking this to [[WP:GOCE]], {{u|Jeromi Mikhael}}? The issues I found are enough to probably merit a copy edit before approval. [[User:Raymie|Raymie]] ([[User talk:Raymie|t]] • [[Special:Contributions/Raymie|c]]) 23:17, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Raymie}} Please type down parts with bad English grammar, so I can fix it.--[[User:Jeromi Mikhael|Jeromi Mikhael]] ([[User talk:Jeromi Mikhael|talk]]) 01:24, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Raymie}} Please type down parts with bad English grammar, so I can fix it.--[[User:Jeromi Mikhael|Jeromi Mikhael]] ([[User talk:Jeromi Mikhael|talk]]) 01:24, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
:::*{{ping|Jerome Mikhael}} [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] I've gone ahead and done it for you. There are several extraneous uses of "the", incorrect tenses, etc. [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sadjarwo_Djarwonagoro&type=revision&diff=959882162&oldid=959855426 Check this diff] to see what I changed; hopefully that aids your writing of additional articles. [[User:Raymie|Raymie]] ([[User talk:Raymie|t]] • [[Special:Contributions/Raymie|c]]) 01:46, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
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:::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] I've gone ahead and done it for you. There are several extraneous uses of "the", incorrect tenses, etc. [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Sadjarwo_Djarwonagoro&type=revision&diff=959882162&oldid=959855426 Check this diff] to see what I changed; hopefully that aids your writing of additional articles. [[User:Raymie|Raymie]] ([[User talk:Raymie|t]] • [[Special:Contributions/Raymie|c]]) 01:46, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 01:47, 31 May 2020

Sadjarwo Djarwonagoro

Created/expanded by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Self-nominated at 14:04, 27 May 2020 (UTC).

  • New enough and long enough. No QPQ necessary (zero credits). I can't check the foreign-language sources, so I'm going to have to assume good faith. One thing I notice is the article needs copy editing for English. Have you considered taking this to WP:GOCE, Template:U? The issues I found are enough to probably merit a copy edit before approval. Raymie (tc) 23:17, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg I've gone ahead and done it for you. There are several extraneous uses of "the", incorrect tenses, etc. Check this diff to see what I changed; hopefully that aids your writing of additional articles. Raymie (tc) 01:46, 31 May 2020 (UTC)