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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:PFHLai|PFHLai]] ([[User talk:PFHLai|talk]]) 00:21, 23 April 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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* <s>... that '''[[Sahwat al-Khudr]]''' is named after an ancient [[Byzantine Empire|Byzantine]]-era church in the village dedicated to [[Saint George]], who is known to Muslims as "[[Khidr|al-Khudr]]"?</s>
 
* <s>... that '''[[Sahwat al-Khudr]]''' is named after an ancient [[Byzantine Empire|Byzantine]]-era church in the village dedicated to [[Saint George]], who is known to Muslims as "[[Khidr|al-Khudr]]"?</s>
  
 
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<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer son]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) and [[User:Huldra|Huldra]] ([[User talk:Huldra|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer son]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) at 19:31, 19 April 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer son]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) and [[User:Huldra|Huldra]] ([[User talk:Huldra|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer son]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) at 19:31, 19 April 2016 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Nice short article, on good sources. Article: I'd think that the nearby other villages are no lead material, but should be in the body. In the lead, rather write more about historic significance. I hesitate regarding the hook, because the linked article has several problems. Anything else? The inscriptions? The quote by the French geographer? - Do you intentionally not say that it's a village? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:28, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Nice short article, on good sources. Article: I'd think that the nearby other villages are no lead material, but should be in the body. In the lead, rather write more about historic significance. I hesitate regarding the hook, because the linked article has several problems. Anything else? The inscriptions? The quote by the French geographer? - Do you intentionally not say that it's a village? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 16:28, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
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::::: '''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Sahwat al-Khudr]]''' is named after an ancient [[Byzantine Empire|Byzantine]] church in the village dedicated to [[Saint George]], who is known to Muslims as al-Khudr"?
 
::::: '''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Sahwat al-Khudr]]''' is named after an ancient [[Byzantine Empire|Byzantine]] church in the village dedicated to [[Saint George]], who is known to Muslims as al-Khudr"?
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Latest revision as of 00:21, 23 April 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 00:21, 23 April 2016 (UTC)

Sahwat al-Khudr

Moved to mainspace by Al Ameer son (talk) and Huldra (talk). Nominated by Al Ameer son (talk) at 19:31, 19 April 2016 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Nice short article, on good sources. Article: I'd think that the nearby other villages are no lead material, but should be in the body. In the lead, rather write more about historic significance. I hesitate regarding the hook, because the linked article has several problems. Anything else? The inscriptions? The quote by the French geographer? - Do you intentionally not say that it's a village? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:28, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
Template:Ping Will revise the lead. I'm assuming the problem with the hook cite is that it's a primary source from the 19th century. I'll try to find an alternative source because I like the hook and more importantly, I think it's the most interesting item in the article. If not, I'll propose an alternative hook about the Byzantine-era inscriptions. --Al Ameer (talk) 22:28, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
Thank you for the review! Understand that you like the hook ;) - Can you improve al-Khudr? To link to an article with so many tags is not ideal. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 05:01, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
Template:Ping Jeez, that article is indeed a mess. It'll need some serious reconstruction (which to me is more time-consuming and complicated than new construction) and my plate's kind of full at the moment. Would it be ok, assuming I find a better source, to de-link "al-Khudr" since the shrine is really dedicated to Saint George, who is referred to as "al-Khudr/al-Khidr/al-Khader" by Levantine Arabs and who is also linked in the hook? --Al Ameer (talk) 18:21, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
That's a good idea!
ALT1: ... that Sahwat al-Khudr is named after an ancient Byzantine church in the village dedicated to Saint George, who is known to Muslims as al-Khudr"?
Symbol confirmed.svg --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:46, 21 April 2016 (UTC)