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:* The article is new enough and long enough. In fact, it's a very nice article indeed. However, I think the hook needs some clarification. Since not too many people know what the Salmson S4-DA is, why not make a clarification by saying its a German car? I think that'll grab more attention. Here's the ALT:
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* '''ALT1:''' ... that at the [[Paris Motor Show|30<sup>th</sup> Paris Motor show]] in 1936, the German automobile '''[[Salmson S4|Salmson S4-DA]]''' was exhibited without any body?
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Let me know what you think. Please ping me on my talk page once you've read my review. [[User:EtienneDolet|Étienne Dolet]] ([[User talk:EtienneDolet|talk]]) 07:06, 10 February 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Salmson S4

Created by Charles01 (talk). Nominated by Rcsprinter123 (talk) at 17:30, 9 February 2014 (UTC).

  • The article is new enough and long enough. In fact, it's a very nice article indeed. However, I think the hook needs some clarification. Since not too many people know what the Salmson S4-DA is, why not make a clarification by saying its a German car? I think that'll grab more attention. Here's the ALT:

Let me know what you think. Please ping me on my talk page once you've read my review. Étienne Dolet (talk) 07:06, 10 February 2014 (UTC)