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* ... that the '''[[San Diego County Administration Center]]''' ''(pictured)'' was dedicated by [[Franklin D. Roosevelt|President Franklin D. Roosevelt]] in 1938 before a crowd of 25,000 people
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* ... that the '''[[San Diego County Administration Center]]''' ''(pictured)'' was dedicated by [[Franklin D. Roosevelt|President Franklin D. Roosevelt]] in 1938 before a crowd of 25,000 people?
 
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Revision as of 23:22, 11 June 2014

‪San Diego County Administration Center‬

the San Diego County Administration Center

Created by Keizers (talk). Nominated by MelanieN (talk) at 18:35, 11 June 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg - The article is new enough, long enough, QPQ done, and either hook is fine, though I think the first is better. The image is fine. I am concerned, however, because there appears to be a lot of close paraphrasing in the article. For example: article: "It contains open grassy areas, a playground, shaded sitting areas, gardens, an interactive fountain and waterfront views.", source: "The space boasts large, open grassy areas, a playground, shaded sitting areas, gardens and an expansive interactive fountain."; article: "At the 1935 California Pacific International Exposition (World's Fair), plans for the building were hailed as a prototype of American civic center architecture.", source: "At the 1935 World’s Fair Exposition, plans for the San Diego City and County Administration Building were hailed as a prototype of American civic center architecture." There are other such instances of close paraphrasing or copying. Also, a few sentences do not have inline citations. Unless this is fixed, it doesn't meet DYK criteria. Thanks! MountainRail (talk) 23:06, 11 June 2014 (UTC)