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::*'''ALT1a''': ... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' was conceived as a series about [[yōkai|supernatural monsters]] for an adult audience? | ::*'''ALT1a''': ... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' was conceived as a series about [[yōkai|supernatural monsters]] for an adult audience? | ||
::*Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | ::*Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | ||
| + | :::*ALT1a works for me. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 23:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Sarazanmai
... that when pitching Sarazanmai, the series' director omitted elements of its plot to improve its chances of being greenlit – notably the centrality of shirikodama, a ball in Japanese folklore located in the anus? Source: Anime News NetworkALT1:... that Sarazanmai was conceived as a series about yōkai (supernatural monsters) for an adult audience? Source: Pash! Plus (in Japanese)- ALT2:... that Sarazanmai is a television series about a mythical ball located in the anus? Source: Anime News Network
- Reviewed: Gateway of India
Improved to Good Article status by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 14:48, 31 October 2019 (UTC).
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- Thanks for the review. I've added your suggestions and struck the other hooks. Morgan695 (talk) 00:44, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
ALT2 is not going to be acceptable because it violates Rule C6, and it just tells the plot. Every creative work has a hooky plot. You could shorten ALT0, or pipe the link in ALT1 as follows:- ALT1a: ... that Sarazanmai was conceived as a series about supernatural monsters for an adult audience?
- Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC)