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:::*ALT1a works for me. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 23:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
 
:::*ALT1a works for me. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 23:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Thanks. {{ping|SounderBruce}} did your review cover ALT1? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:40, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Thanks. {{ping|SounderBruce}} did your review cover ALT1? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:40, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
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:::::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] I'll have to AGF on the sourcing for ALT1 (and ALT1a), as I can't read Japanese and the Google Translate for the page is broken. '''[[User:SounderBruce|<span style="background:#5d9731; color:white; padding:2px;">Sounder</span>]][[User talk:SounderBruce|<span style="background:#1047AB; color:white; padding:2px;">Bruce</span>]]''' 06:08, 29 November 2019 (UTC)
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Revision as of 06:08, 29 November 2019

Sarazanmai

Improved to Good Article status by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 14:48, 31 October 2019 (UTC).

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  • Thanks for the review. I've added your suggestions and struck the other hooks. Morgan695 (talk) 00:44, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg ALT2 is not going to be acceptable because it violates Rule C6, and it just tells the plot. Every creative work has a hooky plot. You could shorten ALT0, or pipe the link in ALT1 as follows:
  • ALT1a: ... that Sarazanmai was conceived as a series about supernatural monsters for an adult audience?
  • Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
  • ALT1a works for me. Morgan695 (talk) 23:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg I'll have to AGF on the sourcing for ALT1 (and ALT1a), as I can't read Japanese and the Google Translate for the page is broken. SounderBruce 06:08, 29 November 2019 (UTC)