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:*An expanded proposed hook per Victuallers' comment. [[User:Montanabw|<font color="006600">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|(talk)]]</sup> 15:53, 31 July 2012 (UTC) | :*An expanded proposed hook per Victuallers' comment. [[User:Montanabw|<font color="006600">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|(talk)]]</sup> 15:53, 31 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
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| + | ::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Size OK; Date OK; Refs. OK; No too close paraphrasing of sources. I've modified the Alt1 hook to refer to the[[Food and Agriculture Organization]] rather than the German society as that is a more well-known authority. Hook length and format OK; hook facts are moderately interesting, and properly referenced. Good to go with Alt1. [[User:BabelStone|BabelStone]] ([[User talk:BabelStone|talk]]) 20:35, 31 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 20:35, 31 July 2012
Schleswig horse
- ... that the Schleswig horse (pictured) is on the endangered list of domestic animal breeds?
- Comment: new author so no QPQ. A hook based on 5 stallions might work if reffed.
Created/expanded by Palinodial (talk), Montanabw (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 07:44, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
- Alt1
- ... that the Schleswig horse (pictured) is on the Food and Agriculture Organization's list of endangered domestic animal breeds, having reached a low of only 5 stallions and 35 mares in 1976?
Size OK; Date OK; Refs. OK; No too close paraphrasing of sources. I've modified the Alt1 hook to refer to theFood and Agriculture Organization rather than the German society as that is a more well-known authority. Hook length and format OK; hook facts are moderately interesting, and properly referenced. Good to go with Alt1. BabelStone (talk) 20:35, 31 July 2012 (UTC)