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{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Schleswig horse]]''' ''(pictured)'' is on Germany's list of endangered domestic animal breeds, rebuilding from a low of only 5 [[stallion]]s and 35 [[mare]]s?
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{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Schleswig horse]]''' ''(pictured)'' is on the [[Food and Agriculture Organization]]'s list of endangered domestic animal breeds, having reached a low of only 5 [[stallion]]s and 35 [[mare]]s in 1976?
  
 
:*An expanded proposed hook per Victuallers' comment.  [[User:Montanabw|<font color="006600">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|(talk)]]</sup> 15:53, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
 
:*An expanded proposed hook per Victuallers' comment.  [[User:Montanabw|<font color="006600">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|(talk)]]</sup> 15:53, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
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::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Size OK; Date OK; Refs. OK; No too close paraphrasing of sources.  I've modified the Alt1 hook to refer to the[[Food and Agriculture Organization]] rather than the German society as that is a more well-known authority. Hook length and format OK; hook facts are moderately interesting, and properly referenced. Good to go with Alt1. [[User:BabelStone|BabelStone]] ([[User talk:BabelStone|talk]]) 20:35, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 20:35, 31 July 2012

Schleswig horse

Schleswig horse

  • ... that the Schleswig horse (pictured) is on the endangered list of domestic animal breeds?
  • Comment: new author so no QPQ. A hook based on 5 stallions might work if reffed.

Created/expanded by Palinodial (talk), Montanabw (talk). Nominated by Victuallers (talk) at 07:44, 31 July 2012 (UTC)

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  • An expanded proposed hook per Victuallers' comment. Montanabw(talk) 15:53, 31 July 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Size OK; Date OK; Refs. OK; No too close paraphrasing of sources. I've modified the Alt1 hook to refer to theFood and Agriculture Organization rather than the German society as that is a more well-known authority. Hook length and format OK; hook facts are moderately interesting, and properly referenced. Good to go with Alt1. BabelStone (talk) 20:35, 31 July 2012 (UTC)