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* ...that the goal of the '''''[[Science Moms]]''''' documentary is to fight the anti-GMO, anti-vax, pro-alternative medicine culture affecting parents? <small>Source: "Producer/director Newell has said: 'The goal of the movie is to provide a counter-narrative to the anti-GMO, anti-vax, pro-alternative medicine culture that has popped up in the world of parenting.'" From: https://www.csicop.org/specialarticles/show/addressing_the_fear-based_narrative_around_gmos_with_natalie_newell </small>
 
* ...that the goal of the '''''[[Science Moms]]''''' documentary is to fight the anti-GMO, anti-vax, pro-alternative medicine culture affecting parents? <small>Source: "Producer/director Newell has said: 'The goal of the movie is to provide a counter-narrative to the anti-GMO, anti-vax, pro-alternative medicine culture that has popped up in the world of parenting.'" From: https://www.csicop.org/specialarticles/show/addressing_the_fear-based_narrative_around_gmos_with_natalie_newell </small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''''[[Science Moms]]''''' documentary owes its existence to a group of pro-science mothers who challenged anti-GMO celebrity mothers with an open-letter? <small>Source: "As was described in a May 19, 2017, article in Paste magazine, a group of bloggers wrote an open letter to several celebrity moms in 2015, criticizing their anti-GMO stance, and explaining the safety and benefits of GMOs... This letter caught the attention of Natalie Newell... this chain of events resulted in the production of ''Science Moms.''" From: http://groundedparents.com/2015/08/19/scientist-and-advocate-moms-to-celeb-on-gmo-food/ AND https://www.pastemagazine.com/articles/2017/05/science-moms-gmo.html </small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''''[[Science Moms]]''''' documentary owes its existence to a group of pro-science mothers who challenged anti-GMO celebrity mothers with an open-letter? <small>Source: "As was described in a May 19, 2017, article in Paste magazine, a group of bloggers wrote an open letter to several celebrity moms in 2015, criticizing their anti-GMO stance, and explaining the safety and benefits of GMOs... This letter caught the attention of Natalie Newell... this chain of events resulted in the production of ''Science Moms.''" From: http://groundedparents.com/2015/08/19/scientist-and-advocate-moms-to-celeb-on-gmo-food/ AND https://www.pastemagazine.com/articles/2017/05/science-moms-gmo.html </small>
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** '''ALT2''':... what is the goal of the '''''[[Science Moms]]''''' documentary?
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Rp2006|Rp2006]] ([[User talk:Rp2006|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:05, 20 November 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Rp2006|Rp2006]] ([[User talk:Rp2006|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:05, 20 November 2017 (UTC).</small>
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*'''Comment''' - the ALT1 wording relies heavily on a non-independent source; the groundedparents.com article is written by Kavin Senapathy who is featured in the documentary. Given this sourcing, this wording should not be used. [[User:Dialectric|Dialectric]] ([[User talk:Dialectric|talk]]) 20:36, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 
*'''Comment''' - the ALT1 wording relies heavily on a non-independent source; the groundedparents.com article is written by Kavin Senapathy who is featured in the documentary. Given this sourcing, this wording should not be used. [[User:Dialectric|Dialectric]] ([[User talk:Dialectric|talk]]) 20:36, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
 
::*I like my first hook better, but I have to disagree about ALT1. That info is also sourced to an article from an independent source: Pastemagazine.com. [[User:Rp2006|RobP]] ([[User talk:Rp2006|talk]]) 05:22, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
 
::*I like my first hook better, but I have to disagree about ALT1. That info is also sourced to an article from an independent source: Pastemagazine.com. [[User:Rp2006|RobP]] ([[User talk:Rp2006|talk]]) 05:22, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
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*'''Comment''' - the hook and the ALT1 are too long in my opinion, so I've suggested ALT2. The article is all right in my opinion. [[User:Sylwia Ufnalska|Sylwia Ufnalska]] ([[User talk:Sylwia Ufnalska|talk]]) 16:15, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Science Moms

Created by Rp2006 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:05, 20 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Comment - the ALT1 wording relies heavily on a non-independent source; the groundedparents.com article is written by Kavin Senapathy who is featured in the documentary. Given this sourcing, this wording should not be used. Dialectric (talk) 20:36, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
  • I like my first hook better, but I have to disagree about ALT1. That info is also sourced to an article from an independent source: Pastemagazine.com. RobP (talk) 05:22, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Comment - the hook and the ALT1 are too long in my opinion, so I've suggested ALT2. The article is all right in my opinion. Sylwia Ufnalska (talk) 16:15, 25 November 2017 (UTC)