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*'''Comment''' -  Oh no - '''please''' don't use ALT2.. "Do you know what is the goal of..." is not even grammatically correct! Also the original hook is within character limit, so what is the problem? If the original MUST be shortened, I suggest: ALT3 [[User:Rp2006|RobP]] ([[User talk:Rp2006|talk]]) 17:29, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
 
*'''Comment''' -  Oh no - '''please''' don't use ALT2.. "Do you know what is the goal of..." is not even grammatically correct! Also the original hook is within character limit, so what is the problem? If the original MUST be shortened, I suggest: ALT3 [[User:Rp2006|RobP]] ([[User talk:Rp2006|talk]]) 17:29, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
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*'''Comment''' -  don't use ALT2 - flawed grammar and does not give any indication of what the linked subject is.[[User:Dialectric|Dialectric]] ([[User talk:Dialectric|talk]]) 16:45, 26 November 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 16:46, 26 November 2017

Science Moms

  • ALT3:...that the goal of the Science Moms documentary is to fight the anti-science culture affecting parents?

Created by Rp2006 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:05, 20 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Comment - the ALT1 wording relies heavily on a non-independent source; the groundedparents.com article is written by Kavin Senapathy who is featured in the documentary. Given this sourcing, this wording should not be used. Dialectric (talk) 20:36, 20 November 2017 (UTC)
  • I like my first hook better, but I have to disagree about ALT1. That info is also sourced to an article from an independent source: Pastemagazine.com. RobP (talk) 05:22, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Comment - Oh no - please don't use ALT2.. "Do you know what is the goal of..." is not even grammatically correct! Also the original hook is within character limit, so what is the problem? If the original MUST be shortened, I suggest: ALT3 RobP (talk) 17:29, 25 November 2017 (UTC)
  • Comment - don't use ALT2 - flawed grammar and does not give any indication of what the linked subject is.Dialectric (talk) 16:45, 26 November 2017 (UTC)