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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{U|EchetusXe}} Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#0033ab">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#000000">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{U|EchetusXe}} Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#0033ab">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#000000">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | ::I have to say that there aren't many vegan footballers. How about we just change the hook to state that he became vegan and not mention the fitness quote?[[User:EchetusXe|Echetus]][[User talk:EchetusXe|'''X'''e]] 13:31, 21 November 2020 (UTC) | |
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Shaun Brisley
- ... that professional footballer Shaun Brisley credited his vegan diet with improving his fitness? "Shaun Brisley has revealed how turning vegan has played a part in his brilliant form for Notts County"
- Reviewed: Georgies
Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Self-nominated at 15:42, 2 November 2020 (UTC).
- Seeing a comment was made on 3 November but not a full review, I will conduct a full review (though I agree with Template:U's comments about the hook)
Article is long enough (7259 characters), is a GA, nominated in time (became GA on 1 November, nominated on 2 November), and article is within policy
As highlighted above, a hook that a vegan thinks veganism has helped them is uninteresting, as it's very common for vegans to post support for veganism. Please can you provide a more interesting hook?
QPQ done
Template:U Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. Joseph2302 (talk) 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC)