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*'''Comment''' - While it seems interesting, I'm not quite sure what this hook means, that someone's name is associated with expensive gems. Surely you mean that the ''person'' is associated, or the name itself? By associated, do you mean this person has owned/brokered/handled these gems? The text included in the article is similarly vague. ▫ '''[[User:JohnnyMrNinja|<font color="#202040">Johnny</font><font color="#204040">Mr</font><font color="#206040">Nin</font><font color="#204040">ja</font>]]''' 19:18, 22 April 2012 (UTC) | *'''Comment''' - While it seems interesting, I'm not quite sure what this hook means, that someone's name is associated with expensive gems. Surely you mean that the ''person'' is associated, or the name itself? By associated, do you mean this person has owned/brokered/handled these gems? The text included in the article is similarly vague. ▫ '''[[User:JohnnyMrNinja|<font color="#202040">Johnny</font><font color="#204040">Mr</font><font color="#206040">Nin</font><font color="#204040">ja</font>]]''' 19:18, 22 April 2012 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::*I was referring to the fact that the diamonds are called by his name – e.g. the [[Moussaieff Red Diamond]]. However, if that is too vague, how about this: | ||
+ | ::*'''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Shlomo Moussaieff (businessman)|Shlomo Moussaieff]]''' owns rare [[gemstone]]s worth millions of dollars, including a flawless [[Diamond color|blue diamond]] and the world's largest known [[Moussaieff Red Diamond|red diamond]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 12:35, 23 April 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 12:35, 23 April 2012
Shlomo Moussaieff (businessman)
- ... that Shlomo MoussaieffTemplate:`s name is associated with rare gemstones worth millions of dollars, including a flawless blue diamond and the world's largest known red diamond?
- Reviewed: Westward Ho!
- Comment: I came across this article with multiple tags and one dead-link reference to a blog. Since it is a biography of a living person, I added many reliable sources and doubled it in size. Therefore I'm nominating it for a 2x BLP expansion.
Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 00:22, 20 April 2012 (UTC)
- Comment - While it seems interesting, I'm not quite sure what this hook means, that someone's name is associated with expensive gems. Surely you mean that the person is associated, or the name itself? By associated, do you mean this person has owned/brokered/handled these gems? The text included in the article is similarly vague. ▫ JohnnyMrNinja 19:18, 22 April 2012 (UTC)
- I was referring to the fact that the diamonds are called by his name – e.g. the Moussaieff Red Diamond. However, if that is too vague, how about this:
- ALT1: ... that Shlomo Moussaieff owns rare gemstones worth millions of dollars, including a flawless blue diamond and the world's largest known red diamond? Yoninah (talk) 12:35, 23 April 2012 (UTC)