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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]])&nbsp;05:53, 15 April 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that at the time of its completion, the '''[[Socony–Mobil Building]]''' ''(pictured)'' was the largest air-conditioned building in the world? <small>Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=3GIrAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA118</small>
 
* ... that at the time of its completion, the '''[[Socony–Mobil Building]]''' ''(pictured)'' was the largest air-conditioned building in the world? <small>Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=3GIrAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA118</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Socony–Mobil Building]]''' ''(pictured)'', a speculative real estate development, was fully leased a year before its completion? <small>Source: [https://timesmachine.nytimes.com/timesmachine/1955/02/27/issue.html NY Times 1955]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Socony–Mobil Building]]''' ''(pictured)'', a speculative real estate development, was fully leased a year before its completion? <small>Source: [https://timesmachine.nytimes.com/timesmachine/1955/02/27/issue.html NY Times 1955]</small>
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x expansion is verified, other article requirements are met. All three hooks are cited inline; assuming good faith for the sources as they're either paywalled or too small for me to verify. ALT0 and ALT2 are the most interesting and eye-catching and either can be promoted, although I've made a slight change to ALT2 and specifying Mumford's occupation as I don't think most general readers would know who he is. QPQ has been done. Final tick pending Earwigs working properly as I'm currently unable to check for close paraphrasing. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 02:52, 6 March 2020 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] 5x expansion is verified, other article requirements are met. All three hooks are cited inline; assuming good faith for the sources as they're either paywalled or too small for me to verify. ALT0 and ALT2 are the most interesting and eye-catching and either can be promoted, although I've made a slight change to ALT2 and specifying Mumford's occupation as I don't think most general readers would know who he is. QPQ has been done. Final tick pending Earwigs working properly as I'm currently unable to check for close paraphrasing. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 02:52, 6 March 2020 (UTC)
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::*{{re|Schwede66}} Thanks, I didn't even realize. ALT3 is fine. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 15:55, 7 March 2020 (UTC)
 
::*{{re|Schwede66}} Thanks, I didn't even realize. ALT3 is fine. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 15:55, 7 March 2020 (UTC)
 
::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I have checked for close paraphrasing and none was found. Good to go with ALT3. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 11:59, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
 
::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I have checked for close paraphrasing and none was found. Good to go with ALT3. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 11:59, 8 March 2020 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 05:54, 15 April 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:53, 15 April 2020 (UTC)

Socony–Mobil Building

Socony-Mobil Building
Socony-Mobil Building

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 20:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg 5x expansion is verified, other article requirements are met. All three hooks are cited inline; assuming good faith for the sources as they're either paywalled or too small for me to verify. ALT0 and ALT2 are the most interesting and eye-catching and either can be promoted, although I've made a slight change to ALT2 and specifying Mumford's occupation as I don't think most general readers would know who he is. QPQ has been done. Final tick pending Earwigs working properly as I'm currently unable to check for close paraphrasing. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:52, 6 March 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT2 is truly brilliant, apart from the "criticized" and "critic" repetition! How about ALT3? Schwede66 01:31, 7 March 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT3: ... that the Socony–Mobil Building (pictured) was disparaged by architectural critic Lewis Mumford as having the appearance of a structure "coming down with measles"?
Symbol confirmed.svg I have checked for close paraphrasing and none was found. Good to go with ALT3. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:59, 8 March 2020 (UTC)