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:*It will take a while to properly look through even a sampling of the article, but a suggestion (also for the GAN) would be a copyedit, as I found some things even in the lead to improve [[User:Chris857|Chris857]] ([[User talk:Chris857|talk]]) 03:30, 23 March 2013 (UTC) | :*It will take a while to properly look through even a sampling of the article, but a suggestion (also for the GAN) would be a copyedit, as I found some things even in the lead to improve [[User:Chris857|Chris857]] ([[User talk:Chris857|talk]]) 03:30, 23 March 2013 (UTC) | ||
::*You're right. I've de-GAN'ed it for now and instead nominated it at the Guild of Copy Editors. It seemed an easy expansion initially because First Contact was 60,000+ characters. But frankly, if I hadn't stumbled across the Michael Piller book online then this would have been stuck around the 30,000 mark. I wouldn't expect to see any other ST films here soon - Nemesis and Generations are both already above 12,000 characters and so it would be difficult to get them to reach a 5x expansion point without some serious padding. [[User:Miyagawa|Miyagawa]] ([[User talk:Miyagawa|talk]]) 09:46, 23 March 2013 (UTC) | ::*You're right. I've de-GAN'ed it for now and instead nominated it at the Guild of Copy Editors. It seemed an easy expansion initially because First Contact was 60,000+ characters. But frankly, if I hadn't stumbled across the Michael Piller book online then this would have been stuck around the 30,000 mark. I wouldn't expect to see any other ST films here soon - Nemesis and Generations are both already above 12,000 characters and so it would be difficult to get them to reach a 5x expansion point without some serious padding. [[User:Miyagawa|Miyagawa]] ([[User talk:Miyagawa|talk]]) 09:46, 23 March 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Star Trek: Insurrection
- ... that Michael Piller's original idea for Star Trek: Insurrection was based on the Joseph Conrad novel Heart of Darkness?
- Reviewed: Strapless dress
- Comment: Expanded from 6930 to 34926, a 5.04x expansion. Image is for the alt hook.
5x expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nominated at 22:03, 22 March 2013 (UTC).
- Alt1:... that scenes featuring the Star Trek: Deep Space Nine actors Armin Shimmerman and Max Grodénchik (pictured) were cut from the final release of the film Star Trek: Insurrection?
- First off, how the heck could this article ever be a DYK?!?!
- Anyway, 5.038x expansion to ~35000 characters prose
- Files appropriately licensed (one fair-use poster), including the one suggested for the hook
- Cited inline, to apparently reliable sources (and books!)
- It will take a while to properly look through even a sampling of the article, but a suggestion (also for the GAN) would be a copyedit, as I found some things even in the lead to improve Chris857 (talk) 03:30, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
- You're right. I've de-GAN'ed it for now and instead nominated it at the Guild of Copy Editors. It seemed an easy expansion initially because First Contact was 60,000+ characters. But frankly, if I hadn't stumbled across the Michael Piller book online then this would have been stuck around the 30,000 mark. I wouldn't expect to see any other ST films here soon - Nemesis and Generations are both already above 12,000 characters and so it would be difficult to get them to reach a 5x expansion point without some serious padding. Miyagawa (talk) 09:46, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
- It's been well over two weeks without any further action. Is this article still awaiting the abovementioned copyedit? How soon will it be ready for a final DYK review, or is it ready now? BlueMoonset (talk) 04:22, 10 April 2013 (UTC)