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:*'''ALT2a:''' ... that the creation of the '''[[Swedish Levant Company]]''' in [[1738]] was controversial because of a disagreement between several Swedish merchants and the [[Hats (party)|Hat Party]]? --[[User:Valereee|valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 16:38, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
 
:*'''ALT2a:''' ... that the creation of the '''[[Swedish Levant Company]]''' in [[1738]] was controversial because of a disagreement between several Swedish merchants and the [[Hats (party)|Hat Party]]? --[[User:Valereee|valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 16:38, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
 
:ALT2a is really good. I have however seen some typos in the article, for example "At major issue was" instead of "a major issue was". [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 00:11, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
 
:ALT2a is really good. I have however seen some typos in the article, for example "At major issue was" instead of "a major issue was". [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 00:11, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
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::{{u|Narutolovehinata5}}, I've done a quick copyedit --[[User:Valereee|valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 17:47, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
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Revision as of 17:47, 29 May 2019

Swedish Levant Company

Moved to mainspace by Bkissin (talk). Nominated by MJL (talk) at 02:04, 24 May 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I'll do a full review soon, but right now I have concerns about both hooks: they're not exactly eye-catching or hooky. Like, instead of saying that the creation of the company was controversial, it might be a good idea to include the context for that in the hook. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:45, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
I also have to note that, while you have done a QPQ, as you have less than five DYK nominations, you are not required to do a QPQ (you can still do one of course if you want, it's just optional right now). Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:49, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
I figured it'd be the polite thing to do Face-smile.svgMJLTalk 02:52, 24 May 2019 (UTC)
Template:Re Oh my gosh I love that one!!! Only correction would be to change Template:Tq to Template:Tq because according to the source the merchant elite supported the English model.MJLTalk 16:08, 27 May 2019 (UTC)
ALT2a is really good. I have however seen some typos in the article, for example "At major issue was" instead of "a major issue was". Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:11, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
Template:U, I've done a quick copyedit --valereee (talk) 17:47, 29 May 2019 (UTC)