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* ... that [[Reki Kawahara]] originally planned to submit the draft for '''''[[Sword Art Online]]''''' for a competition in 2002, but refrained from doing so because he had exceeded the page limit? <small>Source: ソードアート・オンライン〈1〉アインクラッド (電撃文庫) (in Japanese). {{ISBN|4048677608}}. (afterword)</small>
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* ... that [[Reki Kawahara]] originally planned to submit the draft for '''''[[Sword Art Online]]''''' to a competition in 2002, but refrained from doing so because he had exceeded the page limit? <small>Source: ソードアート・オンライン〈1〉アインクラッド (電撃文庫) (in Japanese). {{ISBN|4048677608}}. (afterword)</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the light novel series '''''[[Sword Art Online]]''''' was released after author [[Reki Kawahara]] requested its publication following his work ''[[Accel World]]'' winning the Grand Prize at the 2008 Dengeki Game Novel Prize?  <small>Source: same as ALT0</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the light novel series '''''[[Sword Art Online]]''''' was released after author [[Reki Kawahara]] requested its publication following his work ''[[Accel World]]'' winning the Grand Prize at the 2008 Dengeki Game Novel Prize?  <small>Source: same as ALT0</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that the anime series '''''[[Sword Art Online]]''''' has been praised for its deep insight on the psychological aspects of virtual reality on the human psyche? <small>Source: [http://kotaku.com/sword-art-online-is-the-smartest-anime-i-ve-seen-in-yea-5947171]</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that the anime series '''''[[Sword Art Online]]''''' has been praised for its deep insight on the psychological aspects of virtual reality on the human psyche? <small>Source: [http://kotaku.com/sword-art-online-is-the-smartest-anime-i-ve-seen-in-yea-5947171]</small>
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::{{ping|Biochemistry&amp;Love}} I'm not sure if your suggestion of changing "for a competition" to "to a competition" works in this case: although Kawahara originally wrote the original draft as a contest entry, he never actually submitted it. Nevertheless, I've changed the hook wording. As {{u|G S Palmer}} has noted in the article history, plot sections normally do not need references. G S Palmer and I have nonetheless added references to all the paragraphs with "Citation needed" templates. As for the suggestion highlighting the success of the series, I'm not sure if that could work for either ALT0 or ALT1 since both refer to the development of the series, and it might only apply to ALT2. Do you have any suggestions on how I can do that? [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 03:15, 27 March 2018 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 03:15, 27 March 2018

Sword Art Online

  • ... that Reki Kawahara originally planned to submit the draft for Sword Art Online to a competition in 2002, but refrained from doing so because he had exceeded the page limit? Source: ソードアート・オンライン〈1〉アインクラッド (電撃文庫) (in Japanese). ISBN 4048677608. (afterword)
    • ALT1:... that the light novel series Sword Art Online was released after author Reki Kawahara requested its publication following his work Accel World winning the Grand Prize at the 2008 Dengeki Game Novel Prize? Source: same as ALT0
    • ALT2:... that the anime series Sword Art Online has been praised for its deep insight on the psychological aspects of virtual reality on the human psyche? Source: [1]

Improved to Good Article status by Juhachi (talk), Zero2001 (talk), Narutolovehinata5 (talk), C933103 (talk), Helmut von Moltke (talk), and KirtZJ (talk). Nominated by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) at 17:00, 24 March 2018 (UTC).

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Template:Ping I'm not sure if your suggestion of changing "for a competition" to "to a competition" works in this case: although Kawahara originally wrote the original draft as a contest entry, he never actually submitted it. Nevertheless, I've changed the hook wording. As Template:U has noted in the article history, plot sections normally do not need references. G S Palmer and I have nonetheless added references to all the paragraphs with "Citation needed" templates. As for the suggestion highlighting the success of the series, I'm not sure if that could work for either ALT0 or ALT1 since both refer to the development of the series, and it might only apply to ALT2. Do you have any suggestions on how I can do that? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:15, 27 March 2018 (UTC)