Difference between revisions of "Template:Did you know nominations/Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)"

From blackwiki
Jump to navigation Jump to search
imported>Damibaru
m (Reply)
imported>Montanabw
(to prep 3)
Line 1: Line 1:
{{DYKsubpage
+
<noinclude>[[Category:Passed DYK nominations&nbsp;from February 2016]]<div style="background-color: #F3F9FF; margin: 2em 0 0 0; padding: 0 10px 0 10px; border: 1px solid #AAAAAA;">
|monthyear=February 2016  
+
:''The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify this page.'''</span> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[{{TALKPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. '''No further edits should be made to this page'''.''
|passed=<!--When closing discussion, enter yes or no -->
+
 
|2=
+
The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Montanabw|<font color="blue">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|<font color="orange">(talk)</font>]]</sup> 22:14, 9 March 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
{{DYK conditions}}
 
{{DYK conditions}}
 
====Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)====
 
====Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)====
 
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)|Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)}}
 
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)|Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)}}
<!--
 
 
                  Please do not edit above this line unless you are a DYK volunteer who is closing the discussion.
 
 
-->
 
 
* <s>... that [[Louis Moreau Gottschalk]]'s '''[[Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)|first Symphony]]''' is historically the first orchestrated setting of a [[samba]]?</s>
 
* <s>... that [[Louis Moreau Gottschalk]]'s '''[[Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)|first Symphony]]''' is historically the first orchestrated setting of a [[samba]]?</s>
  
 
:*
 
:*
 
<small>Created by [[User:Damibaru|Damibaru]] ([[User talk:Damibaru|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:11, 22 February 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Damibaru|Damibaru]] ([[User talk:Damibaru|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:11, 22 February 2016 (UTC).</small>
<!--
 
* {{DYKmake|Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)|Damibaru|subpage=Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)}}
 
* {{DYKnom|Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)|Damibaru}}
 
-->
 
  
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting piece, on good sources! The source says "probably" about the Samba, - that should "probably" go to the article and the hook. Also you can't say "is" because not the complete symphony is Samba, just the second movement. How about mentioning "monster concerts" instead? How about the image of the title page? Nice infobox! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:57, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting piece, on good sources! The source says "probably" about the Samba, - that should "probably" go to the article and the hook. Also you can't say "is" because not the complete symphony is Samba, just the second movement. How about mentioning "monster concerts" instead? How about the image of the title page? Nice infobox! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:57, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
Line 28: Line 19:
 
::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:44, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
 
::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:44, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
 
:::: Yes, this is so much better. "Historically" did feel awkward. Thanks, [[User:Damibaru|Damibaru]] ([[User talk:Damibaru|talk]]) 22:18, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
 
:::: Yes, this is so much better. "Historically" did feel awkward. Thanks, [[User:Damibaru|Damibaru]] ([[User talk:Damibaru|talk]]) 22:18, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
+
*PROMOTED with ALT2.  [[User:Montanabw|<font color="blue">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|<font color="orange">(talk)</font>]]</sup> 22:14, 9 March 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Revision as of 22:15, 9 March 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 22:14, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Symphony No. 1 (Gottschalk)

Created by Damibaru (talk). Self-nominated at 04:11, 22 February 2016 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting piece, on good sources! The source says "probably" about the Samba, - that should "probably" go to the article and the hook. Also you can't say "is" because not the complete symphony is Samba, just the second movement. How about mentioning "monster concerts" instead? How about the image of the title page? Nice infobox! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:57, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
Yes, thank you, Gerda Arendt. I changed the hook to include your comments. Personally, I don't find the title page so notable for anything except something almost like a reference when talking about the symphony more id depth than a DYK. As for the monster concerts, it might be interesting, but I feel that samba music is more broad a subject than larger classical concerts, perhaps...
ALT1: ... that the second movement of Louis Moreau Gottschalk's first Symphony is historically probably the first orchestrated setting of a samba? Damibaru (talk) 21:26, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
Thank you! Please don't change a hook, because later readers may not understand the conversion ;) - I suggest to drop "historically", what other first? Then for example:
ALT2: ... that the second movement of Louis Moreau Gottschalk's first Symphony is probably the first orchestra setting of a samba?
Symbol confirmed.svg --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:44, 25 February 2016 (UTC)
Yes, this is so much better. "Historically" did feel awkward. Thanks, Damibaru (talk) 22:18, 25 February 2016 (UTC)