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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad|Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad|Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad]]
:* ''Comment'': I'm open to rewriting the hook. Maybe something as the following is better: ... that after pulling an [[AK-47]] during an argument, Jordanian Representative '''[[Talal al-Sharif]]''', fired it in the House of Representatives and was consequently expelled?
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:* ''Comment'': I'm open to rewriting the hook. Maybe something as the following is better: ... that after pulling an [[AK-47]] during an argument, Jordanian Representative '''[[Talal al-Sharif]]''' fired it in the House of Representatives and was consequently expelled?
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crispulop|Crispulop]] ([[User talk:Crispulop|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crispulop|Crispulop]] ([[User talk:Crispulop|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Needs full review. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:29, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Needs full review. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:29, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New article is long enough (2,761 characters back on October 18).  No copyright violations detected.  Duplication detector check of main sources [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fjordantimes.com%2Fhouse-shooter-mp-dismissed-another-suspended&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.france24.com%2Fen%2F20130910-jordan-mp-fires-kalashnikov-rival-parliament&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.upi.com%2FTop_News%2FWorld-News%2F2013%2F09%2F10%2FJordanian-lawmaker-dismissed-after-shooting-in-Parliament%2FUPI-57001378815812%2F&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fjordantimes.com%2Flower-house-endorses-new-rules-of-procedure&minwords=2&minchars=13] reveal no close paraphrasing issues (I've exempted key phrases that cannot be change without altering the meaning).  Article is well-sourced.  Hook is 126 characters long (160 characters for ALT1); both are under the 200 character max. limit and are interesting. Ref 4 (verifying both hooks) is a reliable source from ''[[The Jordan Times]]''.  QPQ done.  Looks good to go! —[[User:Bloom6132|Bloom6132]] ([[User talk:Bloom6132|talk]]) 01:50, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 01:50, 21 November 2013

Talal al-Sharif

  • ... that after firing an AK-47 in the House of Representatives, Jordanian Representative Talal al-Sharif was expelled as a member?

Created by Crispulop (talk). Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC).

  • Nothing wrong with hook, but I have edited to remove BLP issues over his alleged intent, & updated - he was still in jail on 28 October. Johnbod (talk) 15:02, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • I've just seen this rule in the DYK criteria (4a): "Articles and hooks that focus unduly on negative aspects of living individuals or promote one side of an ongoing dispute should be avoided." If someone believes this is too negative I will gladly withdraw this nomination altogether. Crispulop (talk) 22:15, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • For a guy elected in January 2013 with under 3,000 votes, & known for only one thing, the focus seems entirely "due". Johnbod (talk) 02:30, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg New article is long enough (2,761 characters back on October 18). No copyright violations detected. Duplication detector check of main sources [1][2][3][4] reveal no close paraphrasing issues (I've exempted key phrases that cannot be change without altering the meaning). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 126 characters long (160 characters for ALT1); both are under the 200 character max. limit and are interesting. Ref 4 (verifying both hooks) is a reliable source from The Jordan Times. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 01:50, 21 November 2013 (UTC)