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::I'll work on the grammar throughout this coming week. With JFH, I honestly don't know about ''notability'', though I think it passes. As for ''reliability'', the website's reviews are frequently quoted by ''[[HM Magazine]]'', among other publications, and John DiBiase, the publisher and owner, has worked with ''[[CCM Magazine]]''.--[[User:3family6|<font color="navy">¿3fam</font>]]'''''[[User talk:3family6|<font color="black">ily6</font>]]''''' <sub>[[Special:Contributions/3family6|<font color="purple">contribs</font>]]</sub> 19:57, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | ::I'll work on the grammar throughout this coming week. With JFH, I honestly don't know about ''notability'', though I think it passes. As for ''reliability'', the website's reviews are frequently quoted by ''[[HM Magazine]]'', among other publications, and John DiBiase, the publisher and owner, has worked with ''[[CCM Magazine]]''.--[[User:3family6|<font color="navy">¿3fam</font>]]'''''[[User talk:3family6|<font color="black">ily6</font>]]''''' <sub>[[Special:Contributions/3family6|<font color="purple">contribs</font>]]</sub> 19:57, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::Okay, just word and sentence structure and grammar is really what the article needs fixes in. Also, the concept album should be reworded so it"s not one big quote. As for JFH, I'll work with that and it seems it is a reliable source. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|DivaKnockouts]] ([[User talk:DivaKnockouts|talk]]) 20:11, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | :::Okay, just word and sentence structure and grammar is really what the article needs fixes in. Also, the concept album should be reworded so it"s not one big quote. As for JFH, I'll work with that and it seems it is a reliable source. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|DivaKnockouts]] ([[User talk:DivaKnockouts|talk]]) 20:11, 19 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
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| + | *:Okay, I've done some work. Anything that I still need to fix?--[[User:3family6|<font color="navy">¿3fam</font>]]'''''[[User talk:3family6|<font color="black">ily6</font>]]''''' <sub>[[Special:Contributions/3family6|<font color="purple">contribs</font>]]</sub> 23:50, 20 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 23:50, 20 January 2013
Talented 10th
- ... that Christian hip-hop artist Sho Baraka attracted controversy when he used the word "nigga" on the album Talented 10th?
- Reviewed: Barcelona Metro 9000 Series
Created by Weeman666 (talk), 3family6 (talk). Nominated by 3family6 (talk) at 01:08, 18 January 2013 (UTC)
While the hook is fine, being interesting and properly sourced, the "Concept" section, in my opinion, needs cleanup. Also, there are many spots where the grammar is not good either, such as this sentence "Opinion on the website Jesus Freak Hideout was more divided." Also, I'm kind of skeptical on the source Jesus Freak Hideout. I see on its WP page that the notability template is in use so I'm wondering if it is a reliable source. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 00:23, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
- I'll work on the grammar throughout this coming week. With JFH, I honestly don't know about notability, though I think it passes. As for reliability, the website's reviews are frequently quoted by HM Magazine, among other publications, and John DiBiase, the publisher and owner, has worked with CCM Magazine.--¿3family6 contribs 19:57, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
- Okay, just word and sentence structure and grammar is really what the article needs fixes in. Also, the concept album should be reworded so it"s not one big quote. As for JFH, I'll work with that and it seems it is a reliable source. — DivaKnockouts (talk) 20:11, 19 January 2013 (UTC)
- I'll work on the grammar throughout this coming week. With JFH, I honestly don't know about notability, though I think it passes. As for reliability, the website's reviews are frequently quoted by HM Magazine, among other publications, and John DiBiase, the publisher and owner, has worked with CCM Magazine.--¿3family6 contribs 19:57, 19 January 2013 (UTC)