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::::::::Deciding what to include and what to omit is part of writing. Surely you can find something interesting to add to get the article back to the 1500 minimum. '''[[User:EEng#s|<font color="red">E</font>]][[User talk:EEng#s|<font color="blue">Eng</font>]]''' 05:23, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | ::::::::Deciding what to include and what to omit is part of writing. Surely you can find something interesting to add to get the article back to the 1500 minimum. '''[[User:EEng#s|<font color="red">E</font>]][[User talk:EEng#s|<font color="blue">Eng</font>]]''' 05:23, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
:::::::::I can do that and I also found another article to use, but I still don't think a discussion first would be bad. I guess we will have to disagree. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 05:25, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | :::::::::I can do that and I also found another article to use, but I still don't think a discussion first would be bad. I guess we will have to disagree. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 05:25, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
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:I fixed the issues and clarified what the bridges are. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 13:19, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | :I fixed the issues and clarified what the bridges are. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 13:19, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::I tried searching for images too, but I can't find any free use ones. It really is a shame. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 20:27, 1 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
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The Big Treehouse
- ... that The Big Treehouse is a tree house that covers 5,000 square feet and has 12 levels that go up to five and a half stories tall?
- ALT1:... that The Big Treehouse is a tree house that has a long spiral staircase which contains 60 steps?
Created by SL93 (talk). Self-nominated at 08:28, 31 March 2017 (UTC).
- Not very good sarcasm and not helpful either. My reasoning for that is for the wikilink alone. SL93 (talk) 17:12, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
- If you think that the purpose of the hook is to let people know it's a treehouse, that's daft. SL93 (talk) 17:14, 31 March 2017 (UTC)
- Calm down. My point is that most readers know what a treehouse is, so that it's certainly unnecessary, in the hook, to state that a treehouse is a treehouse just for the sake of the link. People who don't know what a treehouse is can click through to the article.
- ALT2 ... that The Big Treehouse has 5,000 square feet on 12 levels five and a half stories tall?
- ALT3:... that The Big Treehouse has a sixty-step spiral staircase?
- EEng 03:20, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- I get your point now. It just wasn't obvious from your sarcasm. SL93 (talk) 04:18, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- I added back some of what you removed. I disagree and your reasoning for your removal of the host sentence was vague and I disagree that the builder is not lead-worthy. I refuse to bend to some editor's opinions, with no links to policy, who just happens to come along. SL93 (talk) 04:23, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- Why are you so against discussing it first? SL93 (talk) 05:06, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- If you're talking about the hooks here on this nom page, I'll leave it to whomever reviews this nom to decide whether they're improvements. If you're talking about the article itself, editing by others who just happen to come along is what WP:BOLD is all about, and doesn't require linking to policy in every case. It can, for example, have to do with remedying just plain bad writing (since you seem intent on getting me to come right out and say it). EEng 05:17, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- Why are you so against discussing it first? SL93 (talk) 05:06, 1 April 2017 (UTC)
- Calm down. My point is that most readers know what a treehouse is, so that it's certainly unnecessary, in the hook, to state that a treehouse is a treehouse just for the sake of the link. People who don't know what a treehouse is can click through to the article.
Here's a formal review.
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