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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Montanabw|<font color="blue">Montanabw</font>]]<sup>[[User talk:Montanabw|<font color="orange">(talk)</font>]]</sup> 06:08, 26 June 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that the 2015 Polish horror film '''''[[The Lure (2015 film)|The Lure]]''''' was partly developed as a retelling of ''[[The Little Mermaid]]''?
 
* ... that the 2015 Polish horror film '''''[[The Lure (2015 film)|The Lure]]''''' was partly developed as a retelling of ''[[The Little Mermaid]]''?
  
 
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]) and [[User:Lugnuts|Lugnuts]] ([[User talk:Lugnuts|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]) at 14:56, 22 June 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]) and [[User:Lugnuts|Lugnuts]] ([[User talk:Lugnuts|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]) at 14:56, 22 June 2016 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article has been recently expanded. It is written from a neutral POV. There are appropriate inline citations. While the hook is cited, I don't think that the wording of the article and the hook reflect the intent of the original wording in the source. I think there is something a little ambiguous about the wording of the hook and the article as it stands now. Your article says that the director wanted to "build on a retelling of the Little Mermaid," and that isn't exactly clear. Is it building on a different retelling, or is it retelling the Little Mermaid itself? I like the wording in the original source that the director wanted to make a movie that "reinvented" the tale of the Little Mermaid. Maybe that's just me being a little bit picky, but I think that that section could be more clear, and the hook more "hooky."[[User:Amgisseman(BYU)|Amgisseman(BYU)]] ([[User talk:Amgisseman(BYU)|talk]]) 21:04, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article has been recently expanded. It is written from a neutral POV. There are appropriate inline citations. While the hook is cited, I don't think that the wording of the article and the hook reflect the intent of the original wording in the source. I think there is something a little ambiguous about the wording of the hook and the article as it stands now. Your article says that the director wanted to "build on a retelling of the Little Mermaid," and that isn't exactly clear. Is it building on a different retelling, or is it retelling the Little Mermaid itself? I like the wording in the original source that the director wanted to make a movie that "reinvented" the tale of the Little Mermaid. Maybe that's just me being a little bit picky, but I think that that section could be more clear, and the hook more "hooky."[[User:Amgisseman(BYU)|Amgisseman(BYU)]] ([[User talk:Amgisseman(BYU)|talk]]) 21:04, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
 
::*Yeah, I'll pay that - did ponder how to write it. Just saw the film a couple of days ago and was enthused...how about '''ALT1'''... that the 2015 Polish horror film '''''[[The Lure (2015 film)|The Lure]]''''' is a reimagining of ''[[The Little Mermaid]]''? 0r '''ALT2''' ... that the 2015 Polish horror film '''''[[The Lure (2015 film)|The Lure]]''''' was intended as a reimagining of ''[[The Little Mermaid]]''? [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 22:54, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
 
::*Yeah, I'll pay that - did ponder how to write it. Just saw the film a couple of days ago and was enthused...how about '''ALT1'''... that the 2015 Polish horror film '''''[[The Lure (2015 film)|The Lure]]''''' is a reimagining of ''[[The Little Mermaid]]''? 0r '''ALT2''' ... that the 2015 Polish horror film '''''[[The Lure (2015 film)|The Lure]]''''' was intended as a reimagining of ''[[The Little Mermaid]]''? [[User:Casliber|Cas Liber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 22:54, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I think the article looks good under ALT1. I slightly changed the wording of the sentence in the article to match the hook. Thanks for getting back so fast! [[User:Amgisseman(BYU)|Amgisseman(BYU)]] ([[User talk:Amgisseman(BYU)|talk]]) 19:00, 24 June 2016 (UTC)
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:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I think the article looks good under ALT1. I slightly changed the wording of the sentence in the article to match the hook. Thanks for getting back so fast! [[User:Amgisseman(BYU)|Amgisseman(BYU)]] ([[User talk:Amgisseman(BYU)|talk]]) 19:00, 24 June 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
 
 
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Revision as of 06:09, 26 June 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Montanabw(talk) 06:08, 26 June 2016 (UTC)

The Lure (2015 film)

5x expanded by Casliber (talk) and Lugnuts (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 14:56, 22 June 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article has been recently expanded. It is written from a neutral POV. There are appropriate inline citations. While the hook is cited, I don't think that the wording of the article and the hook reflect the intent of the original wording in the source. I think there is something a little ambiguous about the wording of the hook and the article as it stands now. Your article says that the director wanted to "build on a retelling of the Little Mermaid," and that isn't exactly clear. Is it building on a different retelling, or is it retelling the Little Mermaid itself? I like the wording in the original source that the director wanted to make a movie that "reinvented" the tale of the Little Mermaid. Maybe that's just me being a little bit picky, but I think that that section could be more clear, and the hook more "hooky."Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 21:04, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Yeah, I'll pay that - did ponder how to write it. Just saw the film a couple of days ago and was enthused...how about ALT1... that the 2015 Polish horror film The Lure is a reimagining of The Little Mermaid? 0r ALT2 ... that the 2015 Polish horror film The Lure was intended as a reimagining of The Little Mermaid? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 22:54, 23 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg I think the article looks good under ALT1. I slightly changed the wording of the sentence in the article to match the hook. Thanks for getting back so fast! Amgisseman(BYU) (talk) 19:00, 24 June 2016 (UTC)