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: Per the list provided by [[User:Allen3]] [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Medicine&oldid=prev&diff=580194547 here,] I stopped by to check for compliance with [[WP:MEDRS|medical sourcing]].  I don't see health-related statements in the article that would engage MEDRS, so I will not contribute a full review here, but what stands out immediately is a) why is there a "The" in the article title, and b) the hook needs to be copyedited (even ?), and c) the source cannot be verified unless one has the book, and in such cases, I would request a quote to verify that the source is accurately represented (I realize it is customary at DYK to AGF on hooks, but I don't see any harm in asking that the editor place the quote from the source here for verification-- I would want to particularly verify the word "most" in the hook.) [[User:SandyGeorgia|'''Sandy'''<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 19:14, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
 
: Per the list provided by [[User:Allen3]] [http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Medicine&oldid=prev&diff=580194547 here,] I stopped by to check for compliance with [[WP:MEDRS|medical sourcing]].  I don't see health-related statements in the article that would engage MEDRS, so I will not contribute a full review here, but what stands out immediately is a) why is there a "The" in the article title, and b) the hook needs to be copyedited (even ?), and c) the source cannot be verified unless one has the book, and in such cases, I would request a quote to verify that the source is accurately represented (I realize it is customary at DYK to AGF on hooks, but I don't see any harm in asking that the editor place the quote from the source here for verification-- I would want to particularly verify the word "most" in the hook.) [[User:SandyGeorgia|'''Sandy'''<font color="green">Georgia</font>]] ([[User talk:SandyGeorgia|Talk]]) 19:14, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
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The Sacred Twenty

Group photograph of the first twenty Navy Nurses, appointed in 1908, in front of the Naval Hospital in Washington D.C.

  • Reviewed: Wim T. Schippers
  • Comment: Article created in userspace on 26 October, article moved to articlespace on 28 October.

Created by I JethroBT (talk). Self nominated at 17:27, 1 November 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Very interesting topic and well written article, but the sentence that supports the hook does not seem to have a citation. Lankiveil (speak to me) 09:12, 2 November 2013 (UTC).
Sure-- I've sourced the statement with an existing source in the article. I, JethroBT drop me a line 16:11, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
Per the list provided by User:Allen3 here, I stopped by to check for compliance with medical sourcing. I don't see health-related statements in the article that would engage MEDRS, so I will not contribute a full review here, but what stands out immediately is a) why is there a "The" in the article title, and b) the hook needs to be copyedited (even ?), and c) the source cannot be verified unless one has the book, and in such cases, I would request a quote to verify that the source is accurately represented (I realize it is customary at DYK to AGF on hooks, but I don't see any harm in asking that the editor place the quote from the source here for verification-- I would want to particularly verify the word "most" in the hook.) SandyGeorgia (Talk) 19:14, 4 November 2013 (UTC)