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*<s> ... that '''''[[The Thirteenth Tale (film)|The Thirteenth Tale]]''''', a [[television film]] made for the [[BBC]], is an adaptation of [[Diane Setterfield]]'s gothic novel ''[[The Thirteenth Tale]]''?</s>
 
*<s> ... that '''''[[The Thirteenth Tale (film)|The Thirteenth Tale]]''''', a [[television film]] made for the [[BBC]], is an adaptation of [[Diane Setterfield]]'s gothic novel ''[[The Thirteenth Tale]]''?</s>
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<small>Created by [[User:Tentinator|Tentinator]] ([[User talk:Tentinator|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 18:25, 23 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Readable prose comes to 1808 characters, BUT the great majority of it is quite long quotes. Referencing is good; appropriate citations, no bare URLs. The hook is rather dry and factual and not very "hooky". This is my first DYK review, so someone else should have a look too. [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 21:35, 24 October 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Readable prose comes to 1808 characters, BUT the great majority of it is quite long quotes. Referencing is good; appropriate citations, no bare URLs. The hook is rather dry and factual and not very "hooky". This is my first DYK review, so someone else should have a look too. [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 21:35, 24 October 2013 (UTC)
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:::*'''ALT2a''': ... that part of '''''[[The Thirteenth Tale (film)|The Thirteenth Tale]]''''', an adaptation of [[Diane Setterfield]]'s [[The Thirteenth Tale|novel]], was filmed at [[Burton Agnes Hall]], an [[English country house|Elizabethan manor house]] in [[East Yorkshire]]? —[[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:01, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 
:::*'''ALT2a''': ... that part of '''''[[The Thirteenth Tale (film)|The Thirteenth Tale]]''''', an adaptation of [[Diane Setterfield]]'s [[The Thirteenth Tale|novel]], was filmed at [[Burton Agnes Hall]], an [[English country house|Elizabethan manor house]] in [[East Yorkshire]]? —[[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:01, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 
::::*Support ALT2a and I've done the QPQ ([[Template:Did you know nominations/Nokia Lumia 2520]]). <small><b><span style="border:1px solid;background:#030303">&nbsp;[[User:Tentinator|<font color="white">'''Tentinator'''</font>]]&nbsp;</span></b></small> 17:42, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 
::::*Support ALT2a and I've done the QPQ ([[Template:Did you know nominations/Nokia Lumia 2520]]). <small><b><span style="border:1px solid;background:#030303">&nbsp;[[User:Tentinator|<font color="white">'''Tentinator'''</font>]]&nbsp;</span></b></small> 17:42, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good, ready to go with ALT2a then. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 18:26, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 09:52, 17 November 2013

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 09:52, 17 November 2013 (UTC)

The Thirteenth Tale (film)

Created by Tentinator (talk). Self nominated at 18:25, 23 October 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Readable prose comes to 1808 characters, BUT the great majority of it is quite long quotes. Referencing is good; appropriate citations, no bare URLs. The hook is rather dry and factual and not very "hooky". This is my first DYK review, so someone else should have a look too. Edwardx (talk) 21:35, 24 October 2013 (UTC)
and I've removed a lot of the quotations.  Tentinator  07:59, 25 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Length is now down to 1315 prose characters, so more will need to be added now that BBC press release material quotes (puffery) have been removed. I've also taken care of some close paraphrasing in the second Production paragraph. Assuming that the article will be expanded by at least 200 prose characters or so, I'd like to suggest a combination of the two previous hooks as ALT2, which runs 163 characters, which uses "gothic novel" and "Elizabethan manor house" in the same hook:
  • The article now has over 1500 characters.  Tentinator  09:51, 30 October 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg New review needed, including the ALT hooks. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:45, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough and long enough and the ALT1 hook is suitably cited. Have struck the other hooks because the source does not use the word "gothic". However, QPQ needs to be done before this can go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:19, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Reproposing ALT2 as ALT2a without the unsupported word "gothic":
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Good, ready to go with ALT2a then. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:26, 15 November 2013 (UTC)