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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article has been expanded recently enough and is long enough. H.N. Bate is not mentioned in the source. Where is the Nativity mentioned in source #3? The source #4 does not say "for solo ''only''" Where is "translated ''for the local parish church''"? Not seeing the information on "Persian references" in the source given. I am also having some difficulty with the last two sentences of the "Music" paragraph. Finally, the last source does not appear to support its paragraph at all. Didn't notice any copyvio or plagiarism. Hook is moderately only interesting and needs the disambig link taken out. Otherwise ''seems'' well sourced, although I wonder about the use of italics in the source. QPQ is a bit short. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 10:08, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article has been expanded recently enough and is long enough. H.N. Bate is not mentioned in the source. Where is the Nativity mentioned in source #3? The source #4 does not say "for solo ''only''" Where is "translated ''for the local parish church''"? Not seeing the information on "Persian references" in the source given. I am also having some difficulty with the last two sentences of the "Music" paragraph. Finally, the last source does not appear to support its paragraph at all. Didn't notice any copyvio or plagiarism. Hook is moderately only interesting and needs the disambig link taken out. Otherwise ''seems'' well sourced, although I wonder about the use of italics in the source. QPQ is a bit short. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 10:08, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Jo-Jo Eumerus}} I have made adjustments and source additions based upon your comments. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E  </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 12:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Jo-Jo Eumerus}} I have made adjustments and source additions based upon your comments. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E  </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 12:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
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:::* Still seeing problems with "nativity", "persian references" (where is it said that they were omitted) and the last source. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 14:41, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 
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The Three Kings

The Biblical Magi visiting Jesus
The Biblical Magi visiting Jesus

Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 00:35, 1 January 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article has been expanded recently enough and is long enough. H.N. Bate is not mentioned in the source. Where is the Nativity mentioned in source #3? The source #4 does not say "for solo only" Where is "translated for the local parish church"? Not seeing the information on "Persian references" in the source given. I am also having some difficulty with the last two sentences of the "Music" paragraph. Finally, the last source does not appear to support its paragraph at all. Didn't notice any copyvio or plagiarism. Hook is moderately only interesting and needs the disambig link taken out. Otherwise seems well sourced, although I wonder about the use of italics in the source. QPQ is a bit short. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 10:08, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
  • Still seeing problems with "nativity", "persian references" (where is it said that they were omitted) and the last source. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 14:41, 1 January 2017 (UTC)