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::My issue with the hook is more like it's not immediately clear that the subject of the hook is a service station. I understand if there's an element of surprise that is wanted, but without context, the hook doesn't really sound that good. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 02:00, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
 
::My issue with the hook is more like it's not immediately clear that the subject of the hook is a service station. I understand if there's an element of surprise that is wanted, but without context, the hook doesn't really sound that good. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 02:00, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
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:::It's standard British English. Sample sentence: "I've popped into Thurrock services for a quick coffee so I can get across the [[Dartford Crossing]] for free after 10". [[User:Ritchie333|<b style="color:#7F007F">Ritchie333</b>]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|<sup style="color:#7F007F">(talk)</sup>]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|<sup style="color:#7F007F">(cont)</sup>]] 09:42, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 09:43, 29 May 2019

Thurrock services

  • ... that Thurrock services was built on top of a rubbish dump? Source: "The Department was aware that part of the Thurrock motorway service area site had previously been used for landfill waste" ([1])

5x expanded by Ritchie333 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:21, 28 May 2019 (UTC).

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My issue with the hook is more like it's not immediately clear that the subject of the hook is a service station. I understand if there's an element of surprise that is wanted, but without context, the hook doesn't really sound that good. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:00, 29 May 2019 (UTC)
It's standard British English. Sample sentence: "I've popped into Thurrock services for a quick coffee so I can get across the Dartford Crossing for free after 10". Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 09:42, 29 May 2019 (UTC)