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{{*mp}}... <s>that '''''[[To the Fourth of July]]''''' was written by [[Swami Vivekananda]] ''(pictured)'' on 4 July 1898, on the anniversary of [[United States Declaration of Independence|America's Independence]] (4 July 1776), incidentally died on the same date (4 July 1902)?</s>
 
{{*mp}}... <s>that '''''[[To the Fourth of July]]''''' was written by [[Swami Vivekananda]] ''(pictured)'' on 4 July 1898, on the anniversary of [[United States Declaration of Independence|America's Independence]] (4 July 1776), incidentally died on the same date (4 July 1902)?</s>
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:{{*mp}} ''Comment'': a) '''DATE PREFERENCE: 4 July (preferably first American slot)
 
:{{*mp}} ''Comment'': a) '''DATE PREFERENCE: 4 July (preferably first American slot)
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Titodutta|Titodutta]] ([[User talk:Titodutta|talk]]), [[User:Bgwhite|Bgwhite]] ([[User talk:Bgwhite|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Titodutta|Titodutta]] ([[User talk:Titodutta|talk]]) at 23:51, 31 May 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Titodutta|Titodutta]] ([[User talk:Titodutta|talk]]), [[User:Bgwhite|Bgwhite]] ([[User talk:Bgwhite|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Titodutta|Titodutta]] ([[User talk:Titodutta|talk]]) at 23:51, 31 May 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:* '''Comment''': That hook is a hodge-podge of words. Try something like '''ALT1'''... that [[Swami Vivekananda]] ''(pictured)'' wrote '''''[[To the Fourth of July]]''''' on the anniversary of [[United States Declaration of Independence|United States' Independence]] and incidentally died on the same date four years later?&nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 14:27, 1 June 2013 (UTC)<!--Write first comment here, by replacing this line-->
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:* '''Comment''': That hook is a hodge-podge of words. Try something like '''ALT1'''... that [[Swami Vivekananda]] ''(pictured)'' wrote '''''[[To the Fourth of July]]''''' on the anniversary of [[United States Declaration of Independence|United States' Independence]] and incidentally died on the same date four years later?&nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 14:27, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
 
::*ALT1 okay! --[[User:Titodutta|Tito Dutta]]&nbsp;&nbsp;([[User talk:Titodutta|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Titodutta|contributions]] • [[Special:EmailUser/Titodutta|email]]) 14:31, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
 
::*ALT1 okay! --[[User:Titodutta|Tito Dutta]]&nbsp;&nbsp;([[User talk:Titodutta|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Titodutta|contributions]] • [[Special:EmailUser/Titodutta|email]]) 14:31, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
 
:::* [[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Alright (since I suggested the hook, the current consensus is that I can't review it...). I'd strike the original&nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 14:34, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
 
:::* [[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Alright (since I suggested the hook, the current consensus is that I can't review it...). I'd strike the original&nbsp;—&nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 14:34, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
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::::Made changes above. --<span style="background:orange;border:orange ridge">[[User:Titodutta|Tito]]</span><span style="color:blue;background:white;otit;border-bottom-style:ridge;">☸</span><span style="background:#57C738;border:green ridge">[[User talk:Titodutta|Dutta]]</span> 01:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
 
::::Made changes above. --<span style="background:orange;border:orange ridge">[[User:Titodutta|Tito]]</span><span style="color:blue;background:white;otit;border-bottom-style:ridge;">☸</span><span style="background:#57C738;border:green ridge">[[User talk:Titodutta|Dutta]]</span> 01:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
 
:::::As a military historian, I have to note that the United States declaration of Independence was on 2 July, not 4 July. Tweaked hook slightly. [[User:Hawkeye7|Hawkeye7]] ([[User talk:Hawkeye7|talk]]) 19:49, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
 
:::::As a military historian, I have to note that the United States declaration of Independence was on 2 July, not 4 July. Tweaked hook slightly. [[User:Hawkeye7|Hawkeye7]] ([[User talk:Hawkeye7|talk]]) 19:49, 3 July 2013 (UTC)
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Revision as of 19:50, 3 July 2013

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:50, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

To the Fourth of July

Swami Vivekananda

  • Comment: a) DATE PREFERENCE: 4 July (preferably first American slot)

Created/expanded by Titodutta (talk), Bgwhite (talk). Nominated by Titodutta (talk) at 23:51, 31 May 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Alright (since I suggested the hook, the current consensus is that I can't review it...). I'd strike the original — Crisco 1492 (talk) 14:34, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Long enough, well-cited, hook's good, article's new and the picture is PD. Good to go. NorthBySouthBaranof (talk) 18:49, 1 June 2013 (UTC)
Keep the wording to the title of the page. IE- "United States' Independence" not America's...Lihaas (talk) 19:55, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
Made changes above. --TitoDutta 01:43, 2 July 2013 (UTC)
As a military historian, I have to note that the United States declaration of Independence was on 2 July, not 4 July. Tweaked hook slightly. Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:49, 3 July 2013 (UTC)