Difference between revisions of "Template:Did you know nominations/Tre Klaverstykker"

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* ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces '''''[[Tre Klaverstykker]]''''' have been attested a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"?
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* <s>... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces '''''[[Tre Klaverstykker]]''''' have been attested a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"?</s>
  
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Enno Hallek|Enno Hallek]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Enno Hallek|Enno Hallek]]

Revision as of 05:46, 18 August 2015

Tre Klaverstykker

  • ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces Tre Klaverstykker have been attested a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"?
  • Reviewed: Enno Hallek
  • Comment: improvement of wording welcome

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 10:09, 15 August 2015 (UTC).

  • Hi Gerda, I'm happy to review this and am sure I'll be able to mark it as good to go soon, but there are things to do re. the hook and the article itself. Firstly, I think you mean "ascribed" (effectively meaning "described as") above rather than "attested". Secondly I think the quotes by critics like Morrison of Allmusic should be explicitly attributed to those critics in the text, otherwise one could assume it's Nielson himself saying it. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 09:14, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for the better word!
ALT1: ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces Tre Klaverstykker have been ascribed a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"? Will fix the attributions in the article now. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Tks Gerda -- ALT1 is good to go: article new enough, long enough, fully referenced, and incorporating PD image; hook short enough, interesting enough, and cited to online source. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:27, 18 August 2015 (UTC)