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| − | * ... that [[New York Yankees]]' [[prospect (sports)|prospect]] '''[[Ty Hensley]]''' was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because he did not want to discuss his $1.2 million [[signing bonus]]? | + | * <s>... that [[New York Yankees]]' [[prospect (sports)|prospect]] '''[[Ty Hensley]]''' was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because he did not want to discuss his $1.2 million [[signing bonus]]?</s> |
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:* '''Comment''' The proposed hook is a mess of confusing pronouns. I can't work out whose bonus who didn't want to discuss. --[[User:Dweller|Dweller]] ([[User talk:Dweller|talk]]) 16:01, 5 February 2015 (UTC) | :* '''Comment''' The proposed hook is a mess of confusing pronouns. I can't work out whose bonus who didn't want to discuss. --[[User:Dweller|Dweller]] ([[User talk:Dweller|talk]]) 16:01, 5 February 2015 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::*How's this? – [[User:Muboshgu|Muboshgu]] ([[User talk:Muboshgu#top|talk]]) 16:25, 5 February 2015 (UTC) | ||
| + | * '''ALT1''' ... that [[New York Yankees]]' [[prospect (sports)|prospect]] '''[[Ty Hensley]]''' was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because Hensley did not want to discuss his $1.2 million [[signing bonus]]? | ||
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Ty Hensley
... that New York Yankees' prospect Ty Hensley was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because he did not want to discuss his $1.2 million signing bonus?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Radioplane
- Comment: As you can see from the article history, I created this as a redirect on November 12, 2012. In the baseball project, we have a standing consensus to use these minor league player pages to incubate articles on people who may become notable. This is that Nov 12, 2012 edit where I created the content. As of a few days ago, it was still there. To make it as easy as possible here, I simply unmerged that content with this edit, which had 688 B of prose. Now, it's over 3800, which is 5x. Given the nature of the incident that happened, I'm open to discussion on what a good and appropriate hook would be.
5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk). Self nominated at 15:56, 9 January 2015 (UTC).
- ALT1 ... that New York Yankees' prospect Ty Hensley was allegedly assaulted by another athlete because Hensley did not want to discuss his $1.2 million signing bonus?