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:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Needs full review, with a special eye to sourcing. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 06:21, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  Needs full review, with a special eye to sourcing. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 06:21, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
 
::: [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] A few issues: '''1)''' There's some unverified material in this article. Footnote 2 doesn't seem to support the fact that he was "just the second" to be named Player of the Year twice. The first paragraph under 'College' has a number of facts that aren't mentioned in footnote 4 (at least as far as I can see). '''2)''' Some of the material cited to his LinkedIn profile is inaccurate, or not supported. E.g. co-founding a media company ''since'' retiring from basketball. On that basis, I would question the statement that he retired from the sport "to enter the business world." '''''[[User:Moswento|Moswento]]''''' <sup>[[User talk:Moswento|talky]]</sup> 18:58, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
 
::: [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] A few issues: '''1)''' There's some unverified material in this article. Footnote 2 doesn't seem to support the fact that he was "just the second" to be named Player of the Year twice. The first paragraph under 'College' has a number of facts that aren't mentioned in footnote 4 (at least as far as I can see). '''2)''' Some of the material cited to his LinkedIn profile is inaccurate, or not supported. E.g. co-founding a media company ''since'' retiring from basketball. On that basis, I would question the statement that he retired from the sport "to enter the business world." '''''[[User:Moswento|Moswento]]''''' <sup>[[User talk:Moswento|talky]]</sup> 18:58, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
 
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::::[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] I think a week is sufficient time for an editor who contributes daily to fix these specific issues, or at least to comment on them. No edits made to the article since my review. Unless another reviewer feels differently, I think this should be closed. '''''[[User:Moswento|Moswento]]''''' <sup>[[User talk:Moswento|talky]]</sup> 11:37, 14 December 2012 (UTC)
 
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Ugonna Onyekwe

  • ... that despite being a projected NBA Draft pick in 2003, Ugonna Onyekwe went unselected, and so he spent his entire professional career in Spain and Israel?

Created/expanded by Jrcla2 (talk). Self nom at 19:35, 2 November 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol delete vote.svg LinkedIn is definitely not a WP:reliable source so you're going to have to remove that reference and revise the page accordingly. Plot Spoiler (talk) 22:48, 4 November 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Notifying nominator of issue; this is not one that rises to the X level initially, as it should be fixed without too much difficulty. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:32, 17 November 2012 (UTC)
BLP allows limited use of sources self-published by the subject per WP:BLP#Using the subject as a self-published source. I've trimmed the information cited to his Linkedin profile a little. January (talk) 20:57, 30 November 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote4.png Needs full review, with a special eye to sourcing. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:21, 6 December 2012 (UTC)
Symbol possible vote.svg A few issues: 1) There's some unverified material in this article. Footnote 2 doesn't seem to support the fact that he was "just the second" to be named Player of the Year twice. The first paragraph under 'College' has a number of facts that aren't mentioned in footnote 4 (at least as far as I can see). 2) Some of the material cited to his LinkedIn profile is inaccurate, or not supported. E.g. co-founding a media company since retiring from basketball. On that basis, I would question the statement that he retired from the sport "to enter the business world." Moswento talky 18:58, 7 December 2012 (UTC)
Symbol delete vote.svg I think a week is sufficient time for an editor who contributes daily to fix these specific issues, or at least to comment on them. No edits made to the article since my review. Unless another reviewer feels differently, I think this should be closed. Moswento talky 11:37, 14 December 2012 (UTC)