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* ... that an investment banker was arrested after '''[[United Airlines Flight 976|getting drunk and defecating on a food cart in the first class section of an international flight]]''' 25 years ago today? <small>Source: "[https://www.thesmokinggun.com/file/first-class-drunk-loves-liquor-linen?page=2 At approximately 5:45 a.m. on October 20, 1995 ... A male flight attendant then entered the first class cabin and saw FINNERAN with his pants and underwear down defecating on a service cart used by the flight crew]" ''United States of America v. Gerard Finneran''; October 20, 1995</small>
 
* ... that an investment banker was arrested after '''[[United Airlines Flight 976|getting drunk and defecating on a food cart in the first class section of an international flight]]''' 25 years ago today? <small>Source: "[https://www.thesmokinggun.com/file/first-class-drunk-loves-liquor-linen?page=2 At approximately 5:45 a.m. on October 20, 1995 ... A male flight attendant then entered the first class cabin and saw FINNERAN with his pants and underwear down defecating on a service cart used by the flight crew]" ''United States of America v. Gerard Finneran''; October 20, 1995</small>
** '''ALT1''':... that Gerard Finneran's drunken behavior aboard '''[[United Airlines Flight 976]]''' 25 years ago today, including defecating on a food cart, has been described as the worst [[air rage]] incident ever? <small>Source: Above, plus "[https://boingboing.net/2015/11/25/worst-ever-air-rage-passen.html But I don't think Mr. Bharaj deserves to be called the 'Worst ever' air rage passenger. That honor belongs to Gerard B. Finneran.]"; Mark Frauenfelder, ''Boing Boing''; November 25, 2015</small>
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** <s>'''ALT1''':... that Gerard Finneran's drunken behavior aboard '''[[United Airlines Flight 976]]''' 25 years ago today, including defecating on a food cart, has been described as the worst [[air rage]] incident ever? </s><small>Source: Above, plus "[https://boingboing.net/2015/11/25/worst-ever-air-rage-passen.html But I don't think Mr. Bharaj deserves to be called the 'Worst ever' air rage passenger. That honor belongs to Gerard B. Finneran.]"; Mark Frauenfelder, ''Boing Boing''; November 25, 2015</small>
 
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Gott Vater, sei gepriesen|Gott Vater, sei gepriesen]]
 
:* ''Comment'': The anniversary date I have in mind is '''October 20'''. I know this is very tight but I've been very busy lately. Apologies.
 
:* ''Comment'': The anniversary date I have in mind is '''October 20'''. I know this is very tight but I've been very busy lately. Apologies.
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Hi [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]], review follows: article created 13 October; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up on any overly close paraphrasing from the sources, quotations are all properly attributed; hook is definitely interesting, is mentioned in the article and checks out to cited sources; I don't think ALT1 can be used as there is a consensus (which may be unwritten) against naming individuals without an article in the hook (though I am happy to be corrected on this); ALT0 is fine and the date request is appropriate; a QPQ has been carried out.  On ALT0 I might suggest putting the "25 years ago today" at the front of the hook but happy to leave this decision to the promoter - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 07:26, 17 October 2020 (UTC)
  
 
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United Airlines Flight 976

  • Reviewed: Gott Vater, sei gepriesen
  • Comment: The anniversary date I have in mind is October 20. I know this is very tight but I've been very busy lately. Apologies.

Created by Daniel Case (talk). Self-nominated at 06:23, 17 October 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Hi Daniel Case, review follows: article created 13 October; article exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up on any overly close paraphrasing from the sources, quotations are all properly attributed; hook is definitely interesting, is mentioned in the article and checks out to cited sources; I don't think ALT1 can be used as there is a consensus (which may be unwritten) against naming individuals without an article in the hook (though I am happy to be corrected on this); ALT0 is fine and the date request is appropriate; a QPQ has been carried out. On ALT0 I might suggest putting the "25 years ago today" at the front of the hook but happy to leave this decision to the promoter - Dumelow (talk) 07:26, 17 October 2020 (UTC)