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:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] {{U|Achaea}}, thanks for the speedy reply and fixing. Much better now and this is G2G. [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]) 09:28, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
 
:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] {{U|Achaea}}, thanks for the speedy reply and fixing. Much better now and this is G2G. [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]) 09:28, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The ALT1 hook really says nothing about who she is or what she's famous for. I think a lot of readers won't even bother to click on this. Can you suggest something more hooky? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:23, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The ALT1 hook really says nothing about who she is or what she's famous for. I think a lot of readers won't even bother to click on this. Can you suggest something more hooky? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:23, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
:::: What about ... that ' '''[[Wanjira Mathai]]''' serves as Senior Advisor for wPOWER, which looks to train women in East Africa to become leaders in renewable energy?'[[User:Jesswade88|Jesswade88]] ([[User talk:Jesswade88|talk]]) 21:34, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
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:::: What about '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Wanjira Mathai]]''' serves as Senior Advisor for wPOWER, which looks to train women in East Africa to become leaders in renewable energy?'[[User:Jesswade88|Jesswade88]] ([[User talk:Jesswade88|talk]]) 21:34, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
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:::::* {{re|Yoninah}} Thanks for the comment, seems I was suggesting alts at the same time as Jesswade88, so you've got your pick. Let me know if any of these would be better in your opinion. [[User:Achaea|Achaea]] ([[User talk:Achaea|talk]]) 21:39, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
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:::::: '''ALT3''':... that '''[[Wanjira Mathai]]''' oversees [[AFR100]], an initiative to restore over 100 million hectares of land in Africa by 2030?
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:::::: '''ALT4''':... that '''[[Wanjira Mathai]]''' is the Regional Director for Africa at [[World Resources Institute]]?
 
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Wanjira Mathai

Created by Jesswade88 (talk). Nominated by Achaea (talk) at 20:09, 29 December 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Template:U, New enough, long enough, and neutrally worded. QPQ done and I prefer ALT1 as it focuses on her accomplishments not her parents. Please address the following issues before this can be approved:
  • The sentence "She studied international health in the Rollins School of Public Health at Emory University and graduated in 1996" is not supported by the source. The source says she earned her Masters degree (which should be specified) but does not give a date for graduating.
  • The sentence "The Green Belt Movement was founded by Mathai's mother Wanjira in 1977. Mathai served as Director of the Green Belt Movement from 2002 and in 2005 was made Executive Director of the international organisation" is not supported by the source. As well, interviews are considered WP:PRIMARY and a third source should be found.
  • Template:Ping Thanks for your comments! I have found additional sources for both those sentences and changed to wording to fit with the sources. Please let me know if this is okay, or you think it needs additional work. Achaea (talk) 09:22, 30 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The ALT1 hook really says nothing about who she is or what she's famous for. I think a lot of readers won't even bother to click on this. Can you suggest something more hooky? Yoninah (talk) 23:23, 1 January 2020 (UTC)
What about ALT2:... that Wanjira Mathai serves as Senior Advisor for wPOWER, which looks to train women in East Africa to become leaders in renewable energy?'Jesswade88 (talk) 21:34, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Re Thanks for the comment, seems I was suggesting alts at the same time as Jesswade88, so you've got your pick. Let me know if any of these would be better in your opinion. Achaea (talk) 21:39, 2 January 2020 (UTC)
ALT3:... that Wanjira Mathai oversees AFR100, an initiative to restore over 100 million hectares of land in Africa by 2030?
ALT4:... that Wanjira Mathai is the Regional Director for Africa at World Resources Institute?