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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 07:40, 26 January 2018 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that "'''[[What a Beautiful Name]]'''" represents the first Grammy nomination for [[Hillsong Worship]]? <small>[https://www.eternitynews.com.au/culture/the-name-you-lift-up-reaches-new-heights/]</small>
 
* ... that "'''[[What a Beautiful Name]]'''" represents the first Grammy nomination for [[Hillsong Worship]]? <small>[https://www.eternitynews.com.au/culture/the-name-you-lift-up-reaches-new-heights/]</small>
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that the Voices of Lee cover of "'''[[What a Beautiful Name]]'''" went viral and amassed 5 million views in two days? <small>[http://clevelandbanner.com/stories/voices-of-lees-video-goes-viral-with-more-than-16m-views,62171]</small></s>
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that the Voices of Lee cover of "'''[[What a Beautiful Name]]'''" went viral and amassed 5 million views in two days? <small>[http://clevelandbanner.com/stories/voices-of-lees-video-goes-viral-with-more-than-16m-views,62171]</small></s>
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:* ''Comment'': Request appearance on Main Page for 1/28/18 which is the Grammy Awards broadcast
 
:* ''Comment'': Request appearance on Main Page for 1/28/18 which is the Grammy Awards broadcast
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Lionelt|Lionelt]] ([[User talk:Lionelt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:22, 11 January 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Lionelt|Lionelt]] ([[User talk:Lionelt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:22, 11 January 2018 (UTC).</small>
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:* {{re|Lionelt}} I will review this article. I tweaked the hooks a bit for formatting. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 19:14, 11 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:* {{re|Lionelt}} I will review this article. I tweaked the hooks a bit for formatting. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 19:14, 11 January 2018 (UTC)
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:::::{{re|Lionelt}} That's fine. There's still one unsourced statement in the lead: the quote about the "genre-smashing single" (although you can just reuse reference #10, "The Year in Christian & Gospel Charts: Hillsong Worship & Tamela Mann Lead Lists"). [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 16:11, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:::::{{re|Lionelt}} That's fine. There's still one unsourced statement in the lead: the quote about the "genre-smashing single" (although you can just reuse reference #10, "The Year in Christian & Gospel Charts: Hillsong Worship & Tamela Mann Lead Lists"). [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 16:11, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
 
::::::Oh! Ok, fixed. Thank you for your patience! &ndash; [[user:Lionelt|Lionel]]<sup>([[user talk:Lionelt|talk]])</sup> 07:24, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
 
::::::Oh! Ok, fixed. Thank you for your patience! &ndash; [[user:Lionelt|Lionel]]<sup>([[user talk:Lionelt|talk]])</sup> 07:24, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 07:40, 26 January 2018

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:40, 26 January 2018 (UTC)

What a Beautiful Name

  • Comment: Request appearance on Main Page for 1/28/18 which is the Grammy Awards broadcast

5x expanded by Lionelt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:22, 11 January 2018 (UTC).

  • Template:Re I will review this article. I tweaked the hooks a bit for formatting. epicgenius (talk) 19:14, 11 January 2018 (UTC)

Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.

There are a few concerns, for instance:
  • In "Reception", words like "observes" and "points out" are words to watch. Use extra care with these words: if you mean "said", then use "said".
    • Fixed Reception.– Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
  • In "Other versions", Template:Tq - elite by which standard?
    • Put it in quotes and added inline reference.– Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
But this is not a good article review, and these neutrality issues are minor.
You might need to copyedit this a little. I see grammatical errors like "it's" (for "its"), and some run-on sentences.
  • Grammar fixed. Run-ons fixed.– Lionel(talk) 08:52, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
QPQ: You need one because you have 16 previous DYKs, and a QP Qis required for more than 5.
Template:Re Thank you for fixing these issues. However, there are a few citation needed tags now. These all appear to be minor, since you can copy the citations from the "Charts" section. epicgenius (talk) 14:53, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
I used paragraph referencing per WP:CITEDENSE and removed the tags. If editor objects no problem to cite each sentence but I do think it's overkill.– Lionel(talk) 08:18, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
Template:Re That's fine. There's still one unsourced statement in the lead: the quote about the "genre-smashing single" (although you can just reuse reference #10, "The Year in Christian & Gospel Charts: Hillsong Worship & Tamela Mann Lead Lists"). epicgenius (talk) 16:11, 13 January 2018 (UTC)
Oh! Ok, fixed. Thank you for your patience! – Lionel(talk) 07:24, 14 January 2018 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg All right, this is good to go. epicgenius (talk) 23:48, 14 January 2018 (UTC)