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::*'''ALT1''' ...that the first '''[[White Wonderland]]''' music festival was held on the same night as a [[Together as One (festival)|competing festival]] that its [[Insomniac Events|sponsor]] had co-organized? --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 16:08, 26 July 2013 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 16:08, 26 July 2013

White Wonderland

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 01:53, 26 July 2013 (UTC).

  • I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision: