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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] but I am a new reviewer so we need a second opinion. This is a wonderful article, amazing that the topic is new (and it does indeed seem to be) with over 20k text. The article hasn't been assessed but it is clearly way beyond a stub. Exemplary in style, nicely referenced. I found no copyright or close copying problems. I can't fully fathom the licensing of the albatross photo.[http://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Wonder_albat.jpg] The hook is good and OK on length (in particular I satisfied myself that "digesting themselves to a juvenile state" is adequately referenced). QPQ OK. Hook photo licensed OK. A suggestion: in the hook, link the word "antifreeze" to [[Cryoprotectant]] keeping "antifreeze" in the text. [[User:Thincat|Thincat]] ([[User talk:Thincat|talk]]) 15:27, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
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Wildlife of Antarctica

Icefish lack haemoglobin, making their blood clear

Created by Chipmunkdavis (talk). Self nominated at 13:11, 10 April 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg but I am a new reviewer so we need a second opinion. This is a wonderful article, amazing that the topic is new (and it does indeed seem to be) with over 20k text. The article hasn't been assessed but it is clearly way beyond a stub. Exemplary in style, nicely referenced. I found no copyright or close copying problems. I can't fully fathom the licensing of the albatross photo.[1] The hook is good and OK on length (in particular I satisfied myself that "digesting themselves to a juvenile state" is adequately referenced). QPQ OK. Hook photo licensed OK. A suggestion: in the hook, link the word "antifreeze" to Cryoprotectant keeping "antifreeze" in the text. Thincat (talk) 15:27, 17 April 2013 (UTC)