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:::*'''Full review''': 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in online sources. QPQ done. Both hooks are great; I have a slight preference for ALT1. I added "American historian" to ALT0 because it adds a wry touch to the historical Sherman; I also added "pretend" because that was part of the quote. [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT0 hook ref verified and cited inline. [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Offline ALT1 hook ref AGF and cited inline. Good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:56, 6 February 2018 (UTC) | :::*'''Full review''': 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in online sources. QPQ done. Both hooks are great; I have a slight preference for ALT1. I added "American historian" to ALT0 because it adds a wry touch to the historical Sherman; I also added "pretend" because that was part of the quote. [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT0 hook ref verified and cited inline. [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Offline ALT1 hook ref AGF and cited inline. Good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:56, 6 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Usernameunique}} what do you think about paraphrasing the quote here and in the article? Like: | ::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Usernameunique}} what do you think about paraphrasing the quote here and in the article? Like: | ||
| − | ::::*'''ALT0a''': * ... that American historian '''[[William Chaney]]''' would pretend to shiver and look the other way whenever he walked by | + | ::::*'''ALT0a''': * ... that American historian '''[[William Chaney]]''' would pretend to shiver and look the other way whenever he walked by a statue of [[William Tecumseh Sherman|General Sherman]]"? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:05, 7 February 2018 (UTC) |
| + | :::::*{{u|Yoninah}}, that looks good to me. I made one minor change: "the statue" to "a statue", which feels more appropriate when not quoting. --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 03:47, 8 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
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William Chaney
- ... that American historian William Chaney would pretend to "shudder and avert his gaze whenever he passed the statue of General Sherman"? Source: Mayr-Harting 2013: "Another rhetorical pose was his always pretending to shudder and avert his gaze whenever he passed the statue of General Sherman in Appleton!"
- ALT1:... that William Chaney took a legal view of monsters? Source: Spear, Schulenburg & Hittle 2013: "Chaney published several articles in journals such as the Journal of British Studies and the Harvard Theological Review. Perhaps his most widely cited article is “Grendel and the Gifstol: a Legal View of Monsters,” which appeared in 1962 in PMLA."
- Reviewed: Archie Amerson
5x expanded by Usernameunique (talk). Self-nominated at 06:24, 7 January 2018 (UTC).
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All good to go. — Force Radical ( Talk • Contribs ) 10:38, 7 January 2018 (UTC)
- ALT 1
Incomplete review. Please remember, Template:Tq. That means specifically mentioning them: newness, length, neutrality, copyvio/close paraphrasing, and all the rest. Thank you. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:14, 8 January 2018 (UTC)
- Full review: 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in online sources. QPQ done. Both hooks are great; I have a slight preference for ALT1. I added "American historian" to ALT0 because it adds a wry touch to the historical Sherman; I also added "pretend" because that was part of the quote.
ALT0 hook ref verified and cited inline.
Offline ALT1 hook ref AGF and cited inline. Good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:56, 6 February 2018 (UTC)
Template:Ping what do you think about paraphrasing the quote here and in the article? Like:- ALT0a: * ... that American historian William Chaney would pretend to shiver and look the other way whenever he walked by a statue of General Sherman"? Yoninah (talk) 00:05, 7 February 2018 (UTC)
- Template:U, that looks good to me. I made one minor change: "the statue" to "a statue", which feels more appropriate when not quoting. --Usernameunique (talk) 03:47, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
- Full review: 5x expansion verified. New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen in online sources. QPQ done. Both hooks are great; I have a slight preference for ALT1. I added "American historian" to ALT0 because it adds a wry touch to the historical Sherman; I also added "pretend" because that was part of the quote.