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:* '''Comment:''' Not a review, but very nice job, [[User:Mz7|Mz7]]. However, could the hook be reworded thus: ''... that by the time of the events in [[Marcy Cottrell Houle]]'s 1975 book '''[[Wings for My Flight]]''', only 324 pairs of [[peregrine falcons]] resided in the United States?'' [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]) 18:02, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
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:* '''Comment:''' Not a review, but very nice job, [[User:Mz7|Mz7]]. However, could the hook be reworded thus: ''... that by the time of the events in [[Marcy Cottrell Houle]]'s 1975 book '''[[Wings for My Flight]]''', only 324 pairs of [[peregrine falcons]] resided in the United States?'' I read "that by the events" as "according to" rather than "by the time of," which I suspect is what is meant. [[User:LavaBaron|LavaBaron]] ([[User talk:LavaBaron|talk]]) 18:02, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 18:04, 22 October 2015

Wings for My Flight

  • Comment: First DYK nomination. Please let me know if I've missed any steps.

Improved to Good Article status by Mz7 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:50, 22 October 2015 (UTC).

  • Comment: Not a review, but very nice job, Mz7. However, could the hook be reworded thus: ... that by the time of the events in Marcy Cottrell Houle's 1975 book Wings for My Flight, only 324 pairs of peregrine falcons resided in the United States? I read "that by the events" as "according to" rather than "by the time of," which I suspect is what is meant. LavaBaron (talk) 18:02, 22 October 2015 (UTC)