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* ... that '''[[Wolf W. Zuelzer]]''', who demonstrated that childhood [[leukemia]]s could be cured, died from the disease in old age?  <small>Source: [https://www.nature.com/pr/journal/v19/n12/pdf/pr19852908a.pdf "His seminal paper in 1964 on long-term survival of children with acute leukemia was the first clear statement of the curability of childhood leukemia by early combined chemotherapy"], [https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/local/1987/03/22/retired-nih-director-dr-wolf-zuelzer-dies/dfb18d43-7fcf-48b2-b4ed-961dabe62264/?utm_term=.02d97f5273db "died of leukemia"])</small>
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* <s>... that '''[[Wolf W. Zuelzer]]''', who demonstrated that childhood [[leukemia]]s could be cured, died from the disease in old age?</s> <small>Source: [https://www.nature.com/pr/journal/v19/n12/pdf/pr19852908a.pdf "His seminal paper in 1964 on long-term survival of children with acute leukemia was the first clear statement of the curability of childhood leukemia by early combined chemotherapy"], [https://www.washingtonpost.com/archive/local/1987/03/22/retired-nih-director-dr-wolf-zuelzer-dies/dfb18d43-7fcf-48b2-b4ed-961dabe62264/?utm_term=.02d97f5273db "died of leukemia"])</small>
 
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:* ''Comment'': Please suggest any improvements on the wording.
 
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: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Interesting life on few but good sources, no copyvio obvious. The hook is interesting! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:34, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Interesting life on few but good sources, no copyvio obvious. The hook is interesting! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:34, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]{{ping|97198}} Well, he didn't die from childhood leukemia, as the hook suggests. Do you mean:
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]{{ping|97198}} Well, he didn't die from childhood leukemia, as the hook suggests. Do you mean:
::*'''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Wolf W. Zuelzer]]''', who demonstrated that [[leukemia]]s in children could be cured, died from the disease in old age? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:03, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
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::*'''ALT1''': <s>... that '''[[Wolf W. Zuelzer]]''', who demonstrated that [[leukemia]]s in children could be cured, died from the disease in old age?</s> [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:03, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
 
:::*{{ping|Yoninah}} Well "childhood leukemia" isn't a disease, but if you think people might read it that way, then sure. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 07:48, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 
:::*{{ping|Yoninah}} Well "childhood leukemia" isn't a disease, but if you think people might read it that way, then sure. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 07:48, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 
::::: I'm not a medical expert: do we say ''leukemia in children'', - ''heart disease in children''?
 
::::: I'm not a medical expert: do we say ''leukemia in children'', - ''heart disease in children''?

Revision as of 16:06, 6 June 2017

Wolf W. Zuelzer

Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 07:48, 22 May 2017 (UTC).

Symbol voting keep.svg Interesting life on few but good sources, no copyvio obvious. The hook is interesting! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:34, 30 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svgTemplate:Ping Well, he didn't die from childhood leukemia, as the hook suggests. Do you mean:
  • ALT1: ... that Wolf W. Zuelzer, who demonstrated that leukemias in children could be cured, died from the disease in old age? Yoninah (talk) 17:03, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping Well "childhood leukemia" isn't a disease, but if you think people might read it that way, then sure. 97198 (talk) 07:48, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
I'm not a medical expert: do we say leukemia in children, - heart disease in children?
*ALT2: ... that Wolf W. Zuelzer, who demonstrated that children could be cured of leukemia, died from the disease in old age? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:19, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svgTemplate:Ping, yes, childhood leukemia is a disease. But I like Gerda's ALT2 solution. ALT2 hook refs verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Gerda Arendt. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 13:09, 5 June 2017 (UTC)